All Comments on 'Time Taken Off'

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LittleTommyTudorLittleTommyTudorabout 13 years ago
a 4 out of 5

I can understand your fixation with older women. When I was young older women were a great fantasy for me. Remember the old adage: they can't swell, won't tell and are grateful as hell. That is how I felt about older women that today are called cougars.

Tommy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
......KAREN IS HOT AND READY FOR LOTS OF SEX !!!

...GOOD writing and now write some stories about Karen's dream job as the beach bar's erotic masseuse at Hilton's nudist African swingers resort near Miami..Karen is popular and averages 18 half hour "sessions" per day..and, she is live on the internet 24/7..and loves the huge horse- size hung basketball players ...what fun ,Looking forward to your "massage" stories ... many thanks ..::: ]]]]]]] ::::://///////}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77about 3 years ago

Loved the story - 5 stars- but ended too abruptly! There needs to be chapter 2 where he gets a message “Please come to Boston”

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