All Comments on 'Time Travel Chronicles Ch. 01'
by CounterCulture1
- 6 Comments
mechmanasover 14 years agoThis is a very good start to your story i am looking forward to reading more. The writing is also great both grammatical and spelling and flow. all though the couple of paragraphs with kata technical talk where flow breakers but shows great research. your are ether a good proof reader or you need to hug your editor. thank you for sharing and more please.
Anonymousover 14 years agoLove the setting of this story, looking forward to reading more!
Anonymousover 14 years agoExcellent story. Great sex AND plot... which is really unusual unfortunately. Looking forward to a lot more!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoIt's been three years....and you never finished this awesome story!!! Nothing is sadder than to see one of the more interesting stories on this website languish for years unfinished. Please give your loyal readers, who've voted for you, the favor of finishing. That's all....thank you!!
