All Comments on 'Timestopper Begins Ch. 15'

one of your worst chapters

What the hell, did you just learn the word “pudenda” right before typing this series out?

If I have to read that over used word any more I’ll just stop with this series. It’s like you hit Wikipedia up for some terms and are now so proud that you just won’t stop using pudenda and are actually trying to find ways to shoe horn it into the story.

Enough already. 1 Star from now on due to vocabulary.

Pish posh on these sour commenters. You're a great writer, and have created two of my favorite series. Good work here, as with all. Hope to see TMP rise again some day.