All Comments on 'Tingle's The Word!'

Sitting here,I realize that I am starving for more... Keep up the good work!

I think I speak for everyone who read this story when I say, "Keep it cummin'!" I want to know what happens to them...

I think we all agree. Hot story but you need to continue it to the big pool party. A big six way orgie with Mom and Dad cuming home and joining in...

Everyone seems to be asking for more. If you read the footnote, you'd see that the story is a spin-off from 'Change of Plan', a five-part series written from Matt's point of view, plus 'I'll just borrow Matt, sweetheart', about Matt and Kathy's mom. You'll find them all from my member page!

This was a great story. Well written. Keep up the good work!

Oh god, man, you know females! I got no idea how you know that stuff. 'corse, no real girls would be such sluts but you write pretty well what goes on in their heads - insecurities, worries... all the stuff.

Great story!

Excellent description of everyone's feelings, thoughts, etc. Good work. One of best stories I've read here. And, your grammar and spelling are superb!

I love your story my pussy is soaked and waiting for Matt's cock.

Great story! It really got my blood pumping. Let's hear what happens when their friends come over to swim.

story very descriptive. felt like you looking at them, while they fucked, etc.

This is econd stories of urs I read and must say it was just a good as the first u r a real talented writer. I know u heard this before but KEEP IT CUMMIN! in both senses lol ;)

Ive read alot of stories be4 and this one was gr8 for a couple of reasons. For one, it seemed pretty real. By that i mean there were no 12in cocks and the oral seemed to be real to rather than the strait fucking stories of others.

I came twelve violent times during that! Its a record!

the girl's view. However, it is confusing. Many times when "I said" or something that begins with "I" is said, I immediately attribute it to Matt. Then Matt says something in return, so I have to reread the statements to reorient myself. Still, these are good stories, and I like to hear it from both sides. The author has found a way to make them interesting and sexy. Thanks.

Never read the other story, but I enjoyed this one very much.

Two little virgins making out was very hot, having lost her cherry Cathy has become one hot horny woman.