by Honey123
Honey, well done. It's very sweet and reminds me of the movie "Shall We Dance?" It made me smile.
You do my thumb more than proud by writing such a great story
*big tight hugs*
:D
Aw, hon, what a sweet little story! Great job, sweetie!
I adore "Fook Yu," and "After days of twiddling" damn near made me spit my drink all over the keyboard. Very nice!
I love seeing your sense of humor come out! (I had to go back and read it again, to make sure I got all the little word-plays you included!) As always, you set a scene with very little effort, even in this little fantasy world, and populate it with (almost-believable) characters. Sorry it took me a while to catch up. Nice job!
That was such a treat. Sensitive and so romantic. Forgive me if I found it on the sweeter side, rather than funny. That doesn't mean I didn't love all the little wordplay you put in there. Got a smile on my face. You managed to make a spoof into a feel-good story... how do you do that?!