All Comments on 'Tiny Dancer'

by Honey123

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zeb1094zeb1094over 18 years ago
Well Done

Honey, a cute story, I liked it a lot.

Zeb

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 18 years ago
Very Cute!

Honey, well done. It's very sweet and reminds me of the movie "Shall We Dance?" It made me smile.

mtnman2003mtnman2003over 18 years ago
Creative

Honey,

Great job..... very creative and cute story

BeachGurl2BeachGurl2over 18 years ago
Very cute

Creative and sweet. I liked it. :)

Salvor-HardonSalvor-Hardonover 18 years ago
I'm so honored!

You do my thumb more than proud by writing such a great story

*big tight hugs*

:D

eric shawn listoeric shawn listoover 18 years ago
now can I make fun of harry?

Aw, hon, what a sweet little story! Great job, sweetie!

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 18 years ago
Yay!!!!

I love when you're funny. Fook Yu too.

Abs

cloudycloudyover 18 years ago
Funny!

I adore "Fook Yu," and "After days of twiddling" damn near made me spit my drink all over the keyboard. Very nice!

gotwood49gotwood49over 18 years ago
very inventive, Honey!

I love seeing your sense of humor come out! (I had to go back and read it again, to make sure I got all the little word-plays you included!) As always, you set a scene with very little effort, even in this little fantasy world, and populate it with (almost-believable) characters. Sorry it took me a while to catch up. Nice job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
What a love affair!

That was such a treat. Sensitive and so romantic. Forgive me if I found it on the sweeter side, rather than funny. That doesn't mean I didn't love all the little wordplay you put in there. Got a smile on my face. You managed to make a spoof into a feel-good story... how do you do that?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*snicker*

very fun. had me grinning through the entire tale.

*hugs*

Inde X

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