All Comments on 'To Be The Last Ch. 06'

I am so glad you finally finished this story. It was a great ending to this wonderful story.

you took a long while but the ending is worth it. i wish Alexia could still conceive... but that is just me. you finish the story the way you want it, and it was superbly done. kudos to you. :)

write more please. :)

Worth the waiting, thanks for not giving up on the story!

Thank you for the nice comments. I will admit I was shocked I actually finished this story. I'm in the process of trying to finish up my other story and editing both stories and reposting them all nicely edited. (another confession...I started writing these stories when I was 15).

@ luv_romance, I had a difficult time deciding whether or not to make Alexia capable of having children, but I remember reading a story from one of my favorite authors and her character who had been "barren" (hehehe it was a historical romance) for as long as she knew 'suddenly' could have children by some miracle. It made me go "uh huh...riiiight". So I decided to go the route of Alexia being incapable of having children since I didn't want others reading this story and having the same reaction I had.

Finally you decided to end the story but I thought the story was a bit rushed.. may be it would have been better to finish it in two parts rather than one. Anyways a very good story.

This piece-of-SPAM "comment" has appeared in every ever story I've read so far today. How do we report this? How can it be gotten rid of? How can it never be allowed in the first place?

I'm so happy you finally finished this story! I totally forgot about it before and then miraculously (thankfully) I stumbled across it again! These guys... Oh, my heart. For a second I thought she wouldn't take him back but I knew you couldn't do that to us readers! This is an absolutely fantastic story! Very well done :)

I'm glad it's a happy ending :) Even though they couldn't have children, they could adopt :)

This was an excellent story!!!! Please continue to write, as you have an amazing talent!!! Thank you!!!!!!!

So when do we get Piper and Kaleb's story? Just saying, could be great...

AMAZING. I never envisioned the plot to be filled with sexual tension, love, and tragedy. I am so happy that Alexia and Blake get their happy ending. They both live a hard life -- and despite being privileged, they are just like "ordinary" people. Perhaps you should write another story about Kaleb and Piper eloping. Even though Piper was irritating at first, there was another side to her. Just great!