All Comments on 'To Hire a Cheerleader Pt. 01'

I loved the story, it was fantastic! But why is it called "To Hire a Cheerleader"? Tere did not seem to be any cheerleaders...

Great story though, can't wait to see where this goes.

You really do write wonderfully.

Nice start to the story. It will be interesting to see where it goes.

One major error at the beginning that made me laugh:

"Some of the houses were boarded up and other stood wide open."

As hard as it may be to believe, but California does not have slums like they do east of the Rockies. California does have poor areas but we do not have slums with boarded up windows and abandoned buildings. I remember seeing my first slum in Chicago at age 32. Since then I have seen other slums in my travels. California has poor areas with all of the problems of poverty and crime. But even in those areas all the buildings are occupied. Real estate is just too valuable in California. At least in the metropolitan and suburban parts of the state, SF/LA/San Diego.

Still the story is interesting and I will enjoy reading more.