All Comments on 'To Hire a Cheerleader Pt. 06'
by JewelTran
- 22 Comments
Nightowl21almost 20 years agoReally enjoyed reading this story. Hope you have more just waiting to be published.
Nightowl21almost 20 years agoReally enjoyed reading this story. Hope you have more just waiting to be published.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agothis was great! i really enjoyed it.
you even had me crying DAMN IT!!!!
very cool.
thumbs up!!!! :D
sherlock40almost 20 years agoAfter wading through the normal crap on this site, it is wonderful to read a story with romance and love in it. Please continue with your writing and keep submitting nice stories like this one.
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoProblems and all, this story was so heart touching that I found myself in tears several times. Quite an accomplishment for JewelTran, since I'm not normally this emotional.
Nice going!
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoTo bad you dont have more we can read,
all your stories are great to read, and the storylines
are wonderful and the peolpe looks are not perfect which is
great. well done
DustyKover 19 years agoA "5" isn't high enough a vote for this story. It build over the chapters to a resounding finish. Loved it.
Anonymousover 19 years agoYou write so well and while I enjoy re-reading your tales, I do hope you'll share with us a new tale soon? plllllleeeeeeeeease?
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoThat was soooo wonderful! I acctualy cried at some parts! You have an amazing talent please never stop writing! This is the first story of yours that I've read & now im going to go read the rest! Thank you soooo much! -An adoring reader
Anonymousover 17 years agoThank you for writing this story and the others, they leave me smiling. Thank you for shareing your tallent with us. I know im not alone in the hope that you will write some more.
Anonymousover 16 years agoThank you so much, this story hit so close to my heart that I cant stop crying. You really do have an awesome talent as a writer. Your stories come to life as if you are living the characters yourself. Please give us more to read soon.
Anonymousover 16 years agoAbsolutely fantastic , many thanks, that makes a beautiful change from cheating wives, swapping, and gang bangs, cheers.
ColorofLoveabout 16 years agoWas an unexpected treat, and as usual I fell in love with all the characters. Your dialogue is great and you ability to make this reader believe in the romance is superb. Thank you so much for penning these stories.
Anonymousover 15 years agoJewelTran, I'm not sure you still frequent this site, but I've read everything you posted, and you are a wonderful writer and a very beautiful person. Thank you.
Anonymousover 15 years agoyou had me tearing up on this story, you are a great writer and you definately need to add more stories now! in the year 2008!
Anonymousover 14 years agogreat storyline and the characters were well-developed. the grammatical and spelling errors were a bit distracting though. overall, a wonderful story.
srgeekabout 14 years agoThese comments are for the entire story, not just <B>Part 06</B>.
It is a good story, although fairly predictable. I thought your character development was good even though I didn't like the two principal characters.
<B><I>-- srgeek --</I></B>
You appear to have some issues with the definitions and usages of the words "QUIET" and "QUITE" .
Below are the definitions and examples of usage from Merriam Webter's dictionary online.
<B>Main Entry: quite</B>
Pronunciation: \?kwi-t\
Function: adverb
Etymology: Middle English, from quite, adjective, quit
Date: 14th century
1 : wholly, completely <not quite finished>
2 : to an extreme : positively <quite sure> —often
used as an intensifier with a <quite a swell guy> <quite a beauty>
3 : to a considerable extent : rather <quite near>
usage see plenty
— quite a bit : a considerable amount
— quite a few : many
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<B>Main Entry: 1qui·et</B>
Pronunciation: \?kwi--?t\
Function: noun
Etymology: Middle English, from Anglo-French quiete,
Latin quiet-, quies rest, quiet — more at while
Date: 14th century
: the quality or state of being quiet : tranquillity
— on the quiet : in a secretive manner : in secret
bluebirdnestover 12 years agoI love your stories so much. I'm in tears once again at the end. And the saddest part is this is the last of your stories for me to read. Please write more, they are wonderful.
Anonymousover 4 years agoIs it an auto-correct feature that's changing the spelling of quite to quiet, or does the author really not know how to spell quite?
