To Love a Were Ch. 09

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It was only when Alaron came into the room that he realised why.

"Have you called father yet?"

"Yes... and you know who is also coming. Pathetic."

"Who, you? Yes you are. Now tell me, dear brother... when you met Fiona two days ago, what condition was she in?"

"Umm, she was ravenous... I mean she had never been around so many humans in her life and all she wanted to do was suck the living hell out of them."

"So did she?"

"Of course not! That's why she tried to get away from them and bumped into me," he said. When Draven raised an eyebrow curiously, he rolled his eyes. "Fine... I went to look for her. I've been keeping an eye out for her and when I saw her in such an unstable condition, I took her here..."

"With the sole purpose of testing that pill we've been working on," said Draven matter-of-factly. "You know that thing is not 100% tested yet. Her body probably rejected the matter and went into fight or flight mode," he said, shaking his head. "Guess the little one's not so weak after all... since she chose to fight to stay alive. That probably triggered her powers. I mean, they're after all designed to aid the Vampire in capture of prey."

"Thank you brother. I feel much better now," said Alaron sarcastically. "But how do you explain the sudden ageing? It is impossible for her to awaken again is it?"

"Ah... this is just merely speculative. As you know... your mother was human and so are her parents. I guess the fight or flight mechanism also triggers the human genes in her body to fight as well. It's like getting sick you know; your antibodies fighting with the bacteria and virus. Only in this case, our gene is the virus... and her human antibodies are winning..."

"Thus displaying her real dominant traits? Yeah... she was a brunette when I met her." Alaron gave a loud sigh. "I am so sorry about this..."

"You should be. We've got company... and by the looks of it, they want you to be really sorry," said Draven with a smile. "I'll greet our guests."

***

Draven approached the front door with caution; confident that his father would block any irrational attack from his Werewolf guests. He could tell that the male Were was harbouring rather vicious, murderous thoughts.

"Good evening father," he said with a smile before turning towards Eian and bowing. "Your Excellency... and Lady... oh, Miss Amber MacFarlane? Welcome to my humble home. Please come in."

"Where is she, Culzean?" asked Eian the moment he stepped inside.

"Your Excellency... please sit down. Unfortunately, there is something that we need to discuss before you can see her."

Eian eyed Draven curiously but sat down nonetheless to listen to Draven's explanation. He didn't interrupt until Draven was finished.

"So you're saying that Fiona is not just an unstable violent time bomb but she's also becoming human again?"

"Not exactly... if she's human then she can't possibly have such a powerful ability."

"My son! Are you saying that my only female descendant will eventually... die?" asked Aramis, clearly in shock.

"We do not know anything at this point Aramis... I want to see her. Please," said Eian sadly, turning to Draven.

Draven nodded and ushered them towards the guest room but did not open the door to let them in.

"I would like to forewarn you, Your Excellency that she might suggest you to do harm onto yourself... or worst, herself."

Eian didn't answer but placed a gentle hand on Draven's shoulder and nodded. When he entered the room, he saw that she was conscious but still in a daze; lying on her right side and staring at the window.

"Sweetheart... it's me," he said gently but didn't make an attempt to get closer. It was not just her appearance that was different but her scent too. When she didn't say anything, Eian called her again, this time, taking a step forward.

"Go away..." she said softly but didn't turn around. Eian heard Draven taking in a deep breath.

"Sweetheart... I'm really sorry that I couldn't come sooner. I looked everywhere for you... please look at me..."

"I only want you in the room," she said in a soft voice. "Get everyone out... before I do."

Draven, Amber and Aramis quickly moved away from the door upon hearing her words. With as much care as possible, Eian closed the door and began to walk towards Fiona.

"Sweetheart..." he murmured as he sat on the bed to look at her.

"My life has been very tumultuous... I'm tired Eian..." she said, turning her head to look up at him.

"I know," he whispered and held her close. "I'm here..."

Fiona simply moved closer towards him, pressing her face against his thigh. Slowly she felt the tears escaping her eyes but she tried as much as possible to hide her face from his sight.

"Eian... I'm sorry," she whispered. "But you have to go... I cannot risk having you around me." She felt his muscles tense up as the words sunk in.

"No... I can't just let you suffer on your own... Please Fiona, I want to be with you."

Fiona simply smiled, still hidden from his view, "I might hurt you... and that is the last thing that I want to do," she said. "I might have sudden bursts of anger and say things that I don't mean. I can't Eian... I just can't..."

"I won't leave you Fiona..." he replied calmly. "Unless you make me."

Fiona moved away from him and raised her eyes slowly to look at his; her icy blue against his intense green eyes.

"Walk out of the room, Eian... and... just keep walking," her voice was almost a hiss but he heard it loud and clear.

His legs felt like something was crawling on them and they were wobbling slightly. Even then, he didn't take his eyes off her and watched the way her irises darken to an ebony hue. He could sense her anger and scent the heat coming from her body but he refused to give in to his legs' desire to walk.

He kept his eyes fixed on her for as long as he could... before everything turned black...

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Draven

I love how Draven is towards Alaron. He is so awesome and insanely intelligent. I wish I knew someone like him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
"HOLEY CRAP WOW"

This series just gets better and better i just plain and simply LOVE ANYTHINK you write

Jorjiah xxx.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Agree with goodwillmagic

Kill Alaron-although his @sshole moves have discovered problems that need fixing before anyone gets hurt...

goodwillmagicgoodwillmagicover 13 years ago
Please

kill that bastard Alaron.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 13 years ago
Wouldn't mind if you

killed off Alaron. He's bloody annoying. Actually I wouldn't mind if you killed off any of the vamps. The only characters I even slightly care about are Eian and Fiona. This story still reads like a soap opera and the characters seem weak and juvenile. I'm irritated after every chapter. However, I want to know how it ends and I am curious enough to continue reading. That's a positive thing. Thanks for writing.

canndcanndover 13 years ago
Love for Alaron?? I think I get it

I think she still loves him b/c despite what he did to her, and remember she found out about him being the one to kill her family after she had bonded to him and accepted him, he was the one to nurse her through the awakening. Remember how she described the horrific experience it was and he would stay with her and sleep on the floor when she was screaming and crying through the night. I think her sensitivity is as much a part of her life as her resiliency. I think she sees Alaron for the damaged soul that he is. They also bonded, I seem to think, over the experience of losing their mothers and yes, it is sick that he is the one that caused her to lose hers, but again, I think that she is incapable of hating him.

SizzlinSisSizzlinSisover 13 years ago
0.o WHOA!

1st I have to say I'm in LOVE with Keiran. The picture you painted of him, everything he has done, the idea that HE is the original Were! He's a character I believe I'll carry for a very long time, like whitesabretooth's Amy, and JazCullen's Jared and Rafe.

I HATE that Fiona keeps trusting in Alaron after she's learned that he is the reason for every heartache and tragedy she has ever known, but I'm seeing this weakness as the chicken bone in the gravy.

I can see the very constructive points made by cannd, MizT and willieone, and like the other commenters, I have every faith that your storytelling abilities will answer our questions while entertaining us thoroughly.

I'm very new to the vampire/were life, so I don't know all the 'rules' or the 'Law'. But I do so love the different takes on how and why these two lifeforms are antagonistic with each other, and the varying degrees of history of the Were. Even thought he's a psycho, I thank Alaron for giving us some history on the Vampire/Were inter-relationships.

I truly am looking foward to the next chapter, and any other works you have instore!

willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
Ok!

Have gotten over my shock now. First I can't understand how she could still love Alaron after he has already told her he killed all her family and changed her against her will and yet she still trusts him and believes him. Second I think Draven and Aramis really do care about her but would her grandfather kill Alaron? I doubt it even though he is furious. How can she still have any human gene left when her grandfather changed her blood for his over the months she was with them to make her a true Pureblood so I am now completely confused. As for Eian's bit killing her I doubt that since he has already told her that she would change if into a were in a previous chapter and she didn't want to yet as she had only just gone through one painful change and he wouldn't bit her if he thought she would die he knows better than that ass Alaron what would happen to her and Alaron is already wrong when he said Eian never sired anyone he sired his mother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Really great job!

I was wondering how you were going to make Fiona more mature and it seems you've figured that out! You are really creative and the story is really interesting! Great job! I LOVE happy endings!

chelo2012chelo2012over 13 years ago
Great!

I enjoy the changes and twists of your story. I cannot wait for the next chapter of the story, please don't keep us in suspence too long.

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