by sexipoet
Good chapter you just need more pages but please don't stop posting more of this story
You have to update like again, right now, lol! I cannot wait for Avani and Trace to meet up again. What is Trace's reaction going to be? We already know that Avani had a crush on Trace, so I hope she won't let on how much she wants him when she sees him again. Great update! More please!!
Trace is starting to get annoying. I understand he isn't ready to mate anybody but he has responsibilities. Its not like he doesn't know Avani. I hope he doesn't act like an asshole when he finds out about Avani's wolf. I can see him getting back at his father by carrying on an affair with Rachel.
Story is moving nicely. Hopefully you will give a few more details about Avani because we've been told she's an outcast but don't know why or to what extent. It can't be only because she is curvy and has nightmares, and she can't have been suffering nightmares all her life ( or did they start when Mom died, maybe a violent death she saw?). Readers will complain about short chapters, but not as much if short chapters are posted frequently. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Yves
Rachel I really don't like,!! Can a wolf get a woman that is not his mate pregnant? More please!!
Why would you do me like this?! Its cruel lol hurry with the next installment
liked it. Cant wait to see how they react to seeing each other after yrs.
Keep up the good work
i'm with you ladiebrown, i need more its so damn good
Traceon sounds hot! Love how you added the sense of urgency by moving up the mating. I'm already trying to picture the mating ritual.