by Jennifer C
as usual. Everything you write, Jennifer, is good. You are good. (A writer I mean, not meaning good as in if you can't be good be careful.) Would love to act out this as a play, with you and me as the main characters. I think I would enjoy it.
I love the english accent that this story was charmed with, of course being from texas that would be a fancy <grin> the story sizzled at the end, I liked the charactor build up and I loved the ROMP <grin> keep it up ....(~_*)
GOOD START....SHOWS HOW FRAGILE RELATIONSHIPS ARE AND THAT SOMETIMES "CARPE DIEM" AIN'T WHERE ITS AT. KEEP IT UP.
What can i say, an absolutely outstanding start to a story! I just loved this from begining to end! I can't wait to find out what happens next, will she go back to Tom or stay with Paul, I'm hooked, next chapter pls!!!
Of a great story Looks very good and a strong plot to boot!
keep up the good work.
S. n F.
Brilliant story like all your stories are. I always look forward to new submissions from you. (Would you consider submitting to me? Sexually?)