by Jennifer C
Brilliant story like all your stories are. I always look forward to new submissions from you. (Would you consider submitting to me? Sexually?)
Of a great story Looks very good and a strong plot to boot!
keep up the good work.
S. n F.
What can i say, an absolutely outstanding start to a story! I just loved this from begining to end! I can't wait to find out what happens next, will she go back to Tom or stay with Paul, I'm hooked, next chapter pls!!!
GOOD START....SHOWS HOW FRAGILE RELATIONSHIPS ARE AND THAT SOMETIMES "CARPE DIEM" AIN'T WHERE ITS AT. KEEP IT UP.
I love the english accent that this story was charmed with, of course being from texas that would be a fancy <grin> the story sizzled at the end, I liked the charactor build up and I loved the ROMP <grin> keep it up ....(~_*)
as usual. Everything you write, Jennifer, is good. You are good. (A writer I mean, not meaning good as in if you can't be good be careful.) Would love to act out this as a play, with you and me as the main characters. I think I would enjoy it.