by CaliaAnne
i like it wish it was longer but i sure u can fix that with the next couple of chapters right? i mean we love it alot plez continue
Yes, that was awesome! You write a very compelling tale, please don't stop the story. It is gentle and sensuous with some hard places for grit. I really enjoyed it.
What a great start to the story. I can't wait for the next installment!
I too shall look forward to more of this story, thank you for posting.
This is an awesome start.. I loved it, Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading more.
Hope to see more from you and soon. Fantastic read, hope to see the characters develop and grow with the continuation of your story. Would like to thank you for sharing this little bit of your fantasy world with the rest of us.
I think it was a good start. I look forward to finding out what is in that box. Who put her with that awful woman? SHe's obviously a were who doesn't know it yet so where is she from? I also look forward to finding out why Caleb is being asked to take over? Is Rufus gone? I am assuming the end meant they wanted him to take a mate 'for the pack'. I hope you'll fill in the blanks better in the next chapter. I feel like I am left with so many questions. But, I like the start. I look forward to your developing the characters. You did a great start of that. You write well and I like that you use descriptive language so that it draws a picture. Just take it slow and fill in the blanks. See about getting an editor who may point out where something needs clarification and of course can correct the occasional small mistake. All around great job. Can't wait for more.
I can hardly wait for more of this story and to see the development of the characters!!!! Hurry up
With the next chapters. . . please. : )
You really expect me to wait?? *insert dramatic sigh here* Oh alright, but try not to make me wait too long or I shall go into a fit of the vapors! *wonders if the old southern acting thing is convincing or just annoying* MORE PLEASE!! HURRY!! =^_^= PK
Take your time and go into detail so we really understand who the characters are, where they come from etc. We want to be able to relate to them. I'm already interested in the characters, so that's good! I feel sorry for Kat because of her upbringing and slightly disdainful of her mate, who comes off as the spoiled frat boy type. I'm sure you're going to build on that and that he will win me over.
I would like it if the chapters were a bit longer. One page is a good teaser but two pages is more satisfying.
I am interested in reading more. Keep it up!
I really enjoyed his story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
it's so good... please continue and post ASAP! i hope that your not like the other people who would not finish their stories and just keep their reader's hanging...
it's a great start... i hunger for more... i hope that you would post the next chapter soon.. i'm already hooked with the story... can't help thinking what will happen next. please make it longer... five stars for you!
Wow, How exciting! Please keep going and give us more soon!!!
Are a hoot. I loved all the comments. To let you know, I am working on the next chapter but sometimes I have to work. I'm sorry but I've kind of gotten addicted to having the bills paid and the pantry full. But thanks for reading my story. Oh and yes, Caleb will man up or wolf up as the story goes on.
Dear Girl I hope you Write More! You Make Your Charter Like
A Little Princess that Needs to be Saved But also Have her tuft Enough that She wants to make it on her Own.
this is an awsome story so far!! if the first chapter is anything to go by, the others will be a hit!
The start of this story is amazing, you're a good writer. I'm hooked, and interested, and extremely eager to see where this story goes. Amazing.
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Think this is an excellent start to a hopefully long series??
first of all...love it so far!...but it bugs the crap out of me when i find an amazing story and there's only one entry ;-;.....post more pleeasseeee!
This is off to a great start so come on and don't keep us waiting.
Your story flows and has interesting characters and I would love to read more but if your not continuing the story please let your fans now or simply remove the story please.
This is a great start to what could be an awesome story! I know life is busy and gets in the way...but do update whenever you get the chance, please ;).
Such an amazing start to the story!!!!! Please add more ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more i fell in love with it and you don't have anything more.....sigh i will wait for as long i can for more!
You can't just leave it there! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!
but please write at least 2 pages at a time (I know that's hard to estimate sometimes) . Loved your start story, though, very readable! Do NOT stop writing, you're building a readership with this one!
We need more of this story... Loved it. Just sad to see you haven't posted any more... ):
Please more!!!! Yes you can just leave it there these are my favorite kinda stories! Shapeshifters fate love mystery all in one! Please post more!!!
I really want to know how long we have to wait it's been such a long time are you ever going to finish.
I thought this was a short story, and I would be safe reading it. You might at least have labeled it as chapter 1. That way I would have looked at the date it was written and passed it by because you haven't added anything to it in well over a year. As a short story it is a total flop. As the beginning of a series, it's really good! But no one likes to wait so long for chapter 2. If you aren't dedicated enough to the work of completing a story, don't bother posting anything!
When r u planning on adding the next chapter(s)? I have waited forever for the continuation of the series that u promised!!!
When is the next chapter coming? You're not one those writers who are waiting for a certain amount of comments before finishing are you?!!!!!!
Will this be continued? Or is this another dead end that started off wonderfully?
It had a great beginning I would like to read more. Please don't leave us with only this little but.