All Comments on 'To Run with Wolves'

by CaliaAnne

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Cute

I really enjoyed this, but it's a teaser :) lol write more soon

noircat302noircat302almost 13 years ago
aww

i like it wish it was longer but i sure u can fix that with the next couple of chapters right? i mean we love it alot plez continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
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Loved your story. Can't wait for more! Had to add you as a fav author.

DoctorWolfDoctorWolfalmost 13 years ago
Please keep going!

Yes, that was awesome! You write a very compelling tale, please don't stop the story. It is gentle and sensuous with some hard places for grit. I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wow!=)

Can't wait for the next chapter=D

ScifiantScifiantalmost 13 years ago
Excellent start!

What a great start to the story. I can't wait for the next installment!

ruykoeruykoealmost 13 years ago
good

good first start.

totallyateasetotallyateasealmost 13 years ago
A wonderful start to a story!!

I too shall look forward to more of this story, thank you for posting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Lovely!

YOU NEED TO KEEP THIS UP!!!

NightimevisionsNightimevisionsalmost 13 years ago
Great start!

Keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter.

SxxyDaraSxxyDaraalmost 13 years ago

This is an awesome start.. I loved it, Keep up the good work! Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
wonderful

i loved it....keep up the good work

luv_romanceluv_romancealmost 13 years ago
continue...

...and write fast, as in super fast please... ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
great

Great start to your story. I can't wait to read more.

wall13666wall13666almost 13 years ago
Amazing

Hope to see more from you and soon. Fantastic read, hope to see the characters develop and grow with the continuation of your story. Would like to thank you for sharing this little bit of your fantasy world with the rest of us.

canndcanndalmost 13 years ago

I think it was a good start. I look forward to finding out what is in that box. Who put her with that awful woman? SHe's obviously a were who doesn't know it yet so where is she from? I also look forward to finding out why Caleb is being asked to take over? Is Rufus gone? I am assuming the end meant they wanted him to take a mate 'for the pack'. I hope you'll fill in the blanks better in the next chapter. I feel like I am left with so many questions. But, I like the start. I look forward to your developing the characters. You did a great start of that. You write well and I like that you use descriptive language so that it draws a picture. Just take it slow and fill in the blanks. See about getting an editor who may point out where something needs clarification and of course can correct the occasional small mistake. All around great job. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Awesome

I can hardly wait for more of this story and to see the development of the characters!!!! Hurry up

With the next chapters. . . please. : )

PaganKittyPaganKittyalmost 13 years ago
Oh come ON!!!

You really expect me to wait?? *insert dramatic sigh here* Oh alright, but try not to make me wait too long or I shall go into a fit of the vapors! *wonders if the old southern acting thing is convincing or just annoying* MORE PLEASE!! HURRY!! =^_^= PK

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
AWESOME!!

This is great you did a wonderful job dont make us wait!

samlove23samlove23almost 13 years ago

keep going this should be good ... Great start

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 13 years ago
Nice start.

Take your time and go into detail so we really understand who the characters are, where they come from etc. We want to be able to relate to them. I'm already interested in the characters, so that's good! I feel sorry for Kat because of her upbringing and slightly disdainful of her mate, who comes off as the spoiled frat boy type. I'm sure you're going to build on that and that he will win me over.

I would like it if the chapters were a bit longer. One page is a good teaser but two pages is more satisfying.

I am interested in reading more. Keep it up!

LatinaramosLatinaramosalmost 13 years ago
Amazing!!!!

I really enjoyed his story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WOW!

it's so good... please continue and post ASAP! i hope that your not like the other people who would not finish their stories and just keep their reader's hanging...

princess_alenaprincess_alenaalmost 13 years ago
it's so fantastic!

it's a great start... i hunger for more... i hope that you would post the next chapter soon.. i'm already hooked with the story... can't help thinking what will happen next. please make it longer... five stars for you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
more!

more. NOW!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good Story

Great start, looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Woot Woot - Love it!!

Wow, How exciting! Please keep going and give us more soon!!!

CaliaAnneCaliaAnnealmost 13 years agoAuthor
You guys

Are a hoot. I loved all the comments. To let you know, I am working on the next chapter but sometimes I have to work. I'm sorry but I've kind of gotten addicted to having the bills paid and the pantry full. But thanks for reading my story. Oh and yes, Caleb will man up or wolf up as the story goes on.

allimbaallimbaalmost 13 years ago

thought it was great!

TorChaTorChaalmost 13 years ago
I hope You continue to Write

Dear Girl I hope you Write More! You Make Your Charter Like

A Little Princess that Needs to be Saved But also Have her tuft Enough that She wants to make it on her Own.

cuddlesluttcuddlesluttalmost 13 years ago
more please

You are off to a good start, please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
awsome story!

this is an awsome story so far!! if the first chapter is anything to go by, the others will be a hit!

ShondramwwShondramwwover 12 years ago
More please!!!

this is great so far please keep them coming when you can.

arelativearelativeover 12 years ago

story has a lot of potential looking forward to seeing how you develop it

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Start!

The start of this story is amazing, you're a good writer. I'm hooked, and interested, and extremely eager to see where this story goes. Amazing.

~X

missymoemissymoeover 12 years ago
Really enjoyed it !

Think this is an excellent start to a hopefully long series??

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
first of all...love it so far!...but it bugs the crap out of me when i find an amazing story and theres only one entry ;-;.....post more pleeasseeee

first of all...love it so far!...but it bugs the crap out of me when i find an amazing story and there's only one entry ;-;.....post more pleeasseeee!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
I am seconding the motion on this

This is off to a great start so come on and don't keep us waiting.

scotsrulescotsruleover 12 years ago
Great start to a promising story but were is the rest?

Your story flows and has interesting characters and I would love to read more but if your not continuing the story please let your fans now or simply remove the story please.

Seamless_HarmonySeamless_Harmonyover 12 years ago
Would love more!

This is a great start to what could be an awesome story! I know life is busy and gets in the way...but do update whenever you get the chance, please ;).

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OMG!!!

Such an amazing start to the story!!!!! Please add more ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WHAT???....NOOOOO!!!!!

more i fell in love with it and you don't have anything more.....sigh i will wait for as long i can for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Please add to the story soon.

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

quit enjoyable story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ahh!!

PLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE Add more soon!!!!! I can't wait to hear more =D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please

More please!!!

horsechick91horsechick91about 12 years ago
oh, no, No NO!!!!!!

You can't just leave it there! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
A good one

but please write at least 2 pages at a time (I know that's hard to estimate sometimes) . Loved your start story, though, very readable! Do NOT stop writing, you're building a readership with this one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Where did you go?!

We need more of this story... Loved it. Just sad to see you haven't posted any more... ):

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please

Please more!!!! Yes you can just leave it there these are my favorite kinda stories! Shapeshifters fate love mystery all in one! Please post more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Some more please!!

More, more, more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awwwwww!

I really want to know how long we have to wait it's been such a long time are you ever going to finish.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 11 years ago
It's cruel to tease us like this

I thought this was a short story, and I would be safe reading it. You might at least have labeled it as chapter 1. That way I would have looked at the date it was written and passed it by because you haven't added anything to it in well over a year. As a short story it is a total flop. As the beginning of a series, it's really good! But no one likes to wait so long for chapter 2. If you aren't dedicated enough to the work of completing a story, don't bother posting anything!

codyjack1312codyjack1312almost 11 years ago
2 years! 2 BLOODY YEARS!!

When r u planning on adding the next chapter(s)? I have waited forever for the continuation of the series that u promised!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

When is the next chapter coming? You're not one those writers who are waiting for a certain amount of comments before finishing are you?!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Is there more?

Will this be continued? Or is this another dead end that started off wonderfully?

FalconsverseFalconsverseabout 6 years ago
Please continue the story

It had a great beginning I would like to read more. Please don't leave us with only this little but.

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