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*Hey! This is my first story and I hope you enjoy it. I'm working on the rest of the chapters and do plan to continue. I'd love to know what you think. Hope you like it!
- COMMENTS
Falconsverseabout 6 years agoIt had a great beginning I would like to read more. Please don't leave us with only this little but.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoWill this be continued? Or is this another dead end that started off wonderfully?
Anonymousover 10 years agoWhen is the next chapter coming? You're not one those writers who are waiting for a certain amount of comments before finishing are you?!!!!!!
codyjack1312almost 11 years agoWhen r u planning on adding the next chapter(s)? I have waited forever for the continuation of the series that u promised!!!
katgoddess1about 11 years agoI thought this was a short story, and I would be safe reading it. You might at least have labeled it as chapter 1. That way I would have looked at the date it was written and passed it by because you haven't added anything to it in well over a year. As a short story it is a total flop. As the beginning of a series, it's really good! But no one likes to wait so long for chapter 2. If you aren't dedicated enough to the work of completing a story, don't bother posting anything!
Anonymousover 11 years agoI really want to know how long we have to wait it's been such a long time are you ever going to finish.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoPlease more!!!! Yes you can just leave it there these are my favorite kinda stories! Shapeshifters fate love mystery all in one! Please post more!!!
Anonymousabout 12 years agoWe need more of this story... Loved it. Just sad to see you haven't posted any more... ):
