All Comments on 'To Tempt the Devil Pt. 01'

This story is amazing. I love the storyline and I really wish you would finish it!! I've been waiting for over a year for the ending! I simply don't want to use my imagination as you create a much better story than I do! Please finish this because this is one of my top three favorites on this site!

This is a great story. Why haven't you finished it?

Stumbled on this from the top rated list. I noticed the title said "Part 1", but then I saw 12 pages, so figured it was a complete story. I loved every page, but like all the other commenters, I am disappointed to not find a story end or continuation. You posted this in 2004, so I suppose there's not much hope you'll finish it. Perhaps you've published the complete story somewhere else??

have u stoppd?

god i love this story.. been waiting for a part 2 for 4 years...

listen to ur fans...

Oh, I can not believe that you are going to leave it like this. The story is so strong. And for God's sake you have written "to be continued". Do it please

Don't leave us hanging! Its such a good story

It was amazing until I discovered that there was no ending!!! You havent posted the next part since 2004?! What a buzzkill!

and it has no ending!! come on! after committing yourself to 11 chapters, it only makes sense to conclude the story... come on, please?!

I just finished reading this, thought it was great, and then nothing?! No true ending just a to be continued. When??!!!

should be changed. The story should be complete before submission is allowed. Even some of those that are finished aren't posted timely allowing weeks and even months before each chapter is posted. One has to go back and re-read the story to remember what it was all about. Maybe readers should start complaining to the staff of Literotica for some change. Since this story was left hanging, I won't comment on it.

Lovely Story..

U can judge how much people love it that some of them are literally begging you (me included) to continue with it...

hoping that you will listen to your fans and write again soon..

Gary

pleeeaasssee finish this! its one of the most exciting stories ive come across....and its not one whose ending we can guess...i cant seem to link the prologue at all!!!

please finish it!!!

WOMAN I HAVE READ THIS $TIMES AND YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED SINCE 04. FIVE BLOODY YEARS.

PLEASE UPDATE!

good god.

it can't be left like this! please please put part 2 up! this story was amazing!

it's been 5 years... where is the part 2??? don't leave us hanging... please post the next one... loved it!

One of the best I've come across. The author hasn't written in half a decade though. I hope she is okay.

I loved EVERYTHING about this story except the cliffhanger and the fear it won't be finished!

Great story! Worthy of publishing! However the cliffhanger is unjust without a prompt sequal. Otherwise, great plot, believable characters, and love the story overall. Definite page turner!

The author has died 2 years ago...unfortunately

are you serious? she died, are you 100% sure? :'(

bloody idiot.. cant say anything +ve

~

gary

(garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)

I've just spent a tremendous amount of time reading this amazing story only to find that it ended in a cliff hanger (4 years ago)! Someone below posted that the author died. Is that true? I hope not.

where's your proof she died?

How can this story be left like this?! It's one of the best on this site and it's been left unfinished!!!!!!!

I'm so mad I read this, only to find it will probably never be finished. I wish I could go back in time and worn myself that I was about to be disappointed.

oh that story was so good. I've read published books that weren't that good. Hope the author didn't die because the ending to that story would be brilliant

I loved this story from the get go.

You simply have to post another chapter.

Oh and I really appreciate the length of this chapter. I'd waste time.

God the tension just snaped at the end and vardons obsessionwith faith is hot. I love reading it

Come on there a loads more people reading this story than those who've commented and we'd love another chapter

Please continue your story!!!! I love this and must find out what happens to Faith and Vardon!!

I absolutely love the development behind your characters, and this one was not a disappointment. Please continue this, as well as your other stories. I will be waiting!

Please continue your story!!!!

I can see that you uploaded this story in 2004, and that your last post was in 2006... is it likely that you will be finishing this story?

This is a delightful story, and I can only hope to offer warm encouragement to bring it full circle and complete it. The characters are complex and oh so human. It's been a while, but here's to hoping that they find their way back to the page. :)

I have to admit that I almost didn't read this when I saw the "Pt. 01" and no subsequent postings. But when I saw that it was 11 pages I decided you had probably developed everything enough for it to be enjoyable even if it wasn't complete. I'm glad I read it. It was very good, and I will join with the other commentators in encouraging you to complete the story. Or perhaps you have posted it on a different site? I would love to know!

I am so happy this story will eventually be finished. This is so good I think it should be published. I wish the author a happy and healthy life.

this is one of the best stories i have ever read.... plzzz CONTINUE

I have read this since a long time ago, but you seem not to be adding to it. Just now, I checked your account and saw you claim that you are still alive, so (I know this is rather selfish) please continue the story. I'm dying of suspense.

Please finish the story, its so beautifully constructed for the sequel

this is a fantastic story, it should be a book. Love it!

This has me sitting at the edge of my seat! Please update this story when you get the chance I'm dying to know the fate of vardon and faith!

I first read this more than a year ago and loved it, every once in a while I would check to see if I missed an update. I was dieing waiting for one, but then people started posting that you were dead.

Congratulations on writing an incredible story that so many people love. And congratulations for being alive!

Would it be rude to start begging for more, now?

Boooo! Evil cliffhanger.

please write the next one!!!

Please say your going to finish this story its one of the best ive read and i really want to know what happens next ive been waiting for 2 years in hopes you'll have posted it. please do it soon :)

This was amazing. I never read romance and I never liked regency england but just this one story has got me completely hooked. You're killing me hey, especially when I found out you wrote this 7 years ago :( It's amazing, you're amazing, I'm so distressed there is no end! haha. so tempted to fanfic the shit out of it and finish it myself!

Please update us on whether or not you plan on continuing this story!!!

You haveeeeee to finish this story!!!!!!!

its too good to be left unfinished:(

Hope you'll get to finish this story

-jenn

I never read romances but this is Perfect! Please please write more!

Finish it or take it down. HATE it when these stories remain unfinished for YEARS.

What other motivation do you need to finish a piece of work? We realise you have a life outside of writing stories but this is just ridiculous. Agree with the previous comment. Finish it or take it down.

this is one of the best stories I've read, please finish it!

I love this story! But....I agree, finish it or take it down. It's not fair to read 12 pages of story then not have the satisfaction of following through.

Please finish it! Hell, write the book and tell me where to buy it!!

uve got me pulling my hair in frustration... this story s just too gd

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this story!!! it is remarkable!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEE FINISH THIS. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is just to good not to finish. I agree with the earlier post that if your not going to finish then it should be taken down. It's great and it's just mean to not tell us how it ends. Love your writing!

Please finish!!! OMG! U have to finish this!!!!

Wtf. I most certainly will die if I don't get to read the end of this! Do us all a favor and write the rest! This is cruel! :(

I beg you from the depths of my heart please find it in you to complete this story! All your fans are counting on you! Make us happy!

It's really Gud.. Iv bin cumin back to dis page for over 2 years to find out if it's completed.. Please do finish it...

AAHHHH!!! I can't go on without knowing what happens....where's the rest of the story?!?! I'm addicted!

I loved it! please finish it! :'(

Please u have to finish this one of the best I have read please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You simply must finish this story. You are a very talented writer and this story is far too riveting to be left without an ending.

This story is devine. Please say you I'll finish it. It's been years in the making with hundreds of comments.

I may as well finish it in my head-

Vardon and Faith lived happily ever after....

The End

(^_^)

Amazing story!

no no no no no you cannot possibly leave like that . . .

You cant possibly leave a cliffhanger like that and not add onto it years later. Thats just cruel.

Please I beg of you I am hooked on to this story. I need you to finish this story and let me and many other adoring fans of yours get their regular fix of your inticing stories.

OH NO YOU DID NOT?!?! You just didnt do that?!?!?

Im begging you. You have to finish the story! Its not only an AH-MAY-ZING story but youre writing style has me addicted, like I wanna OD-addicted. Please finish the story - please. I didnt mean to shout at you but Im already going through withdrawal and its not pretty. Put me out of my misery please and finish the story.

Your story is amazing! The plot is well done and the characters are all beautiful. But a cliff hanger! Really!!! And it's not only that, it's the fact that you wrote this in 2004 and didn't have the decency to finish the story. Lame!

Please finish this, I'm sure everyone would love to read what happens next!

Please finish this amazing story. You have left me onedge for a long time, I have read this story at meat half a dozen times an yet I cannot get enough. Will you be so kind and put me out of my misery?

For years I have obsessively checked for updates on this story, I need to learn to let go. I can't though, it's just too good.

I have read many regency novels, however your story has truly captivated and drawn me to it. I am obsessed with your story your writing skills are so eloquent to that of talented writers who have become established in this day and age. I implore you please finish your masterpiece do not let such a gem disappear in times immemorial. I look toward to one day being truly surprised to find a conclusion to lady Faith and Lord Silverstons love story. I have dreamt many endings to this story but I await yours as you are the owner of this amazing story.

Guys unfortunately the author passed away shortly after the release of this story.

but this was released in 04 and the author last published in 07...

I checked the writers biography status and it says it was last updated in 2010?? Care to explain please?

Wouldn't lit. have some way of accessing biographies and telling people the author's dead? if the author really is dead I think I might cry though... and this was posted in 04? this isn't looking good guys

I can't even blv dt an idiot posted dt d author is dead nd others are really cosdrng dt... Just a frustrated reader putting off his frustration by telling dt d writer is dead. The writer just dsnt wanna finish ds.. plain nd simple

It's terribly sad whatever happened to stop theauthor writing because this is an amazing story and I would have loved to read the rest, now I shall just live in disappointment with the possible hope it might be finished at some point. I love this story!

Is there going to be a pt.2, please don't give up writing this its great!!!

What a great fun story - I would have loved to read to a conclusion.

Please please please please someone write a sequel to this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I want an ending!!!

I love the characters; please come back and finish! I can tell there's cataclysmic sex and probably love in their future. You've left us off at the most exciting part!

Please start writing this again! It's absolutely wonderful!!

please finish!!!!

It's such a great story. You should finish it. I want to know what happens with faith and vardon.

I hope you read these comments....so many of us want you to finish it! :)

The title of this chapter says: " Pt. 01" so logically, there should be part 2, epilogue, or at least, a closure chapter?

Even the prologue sounds mysterious and doesn't tie in with part one.

I think its safe to say 10 years later this story will not be completed. Can someone else try please?

You are one of the most amazing writers on this site, and this is one of the best stories. I cannot believe it is incomplete. It definitely deserves a happy ending! Won't you please continue and finish this story? PLEASE?

This story is amazing. Please complete it.

FINISH THE STORY PLEEAAAASE!!!!!!!

It's been years and years since this was posted and yet I keep coming back to it. If I were up to the task, I'd finish it myself! As it is, I think the simplest ending might be best.

Vardon takes off after his erstwhile bride, there's a lot of yelling, which is then interrupted by Faith's brother. There's a lot of back and forth until her brother realizes what's happened.

"You... were ruined... by your own fiance? THAT was your grand plan?" Then he just starts laughing so hard he can't breathe.

And of course, he makes Faith go through with the marriage regardless, yada yada, happy endings for all. ;)

i loooove this story, please finish it, ive been waiting for years, and ur sucha talented author u should publish these! PLEASE

Please

This is fantastic.