All Comments on 'Tom & Natasha Ch. 01'

There's nothing "Erotica" about this tale. It's all about she and all women have power over his genitals. Nothing erotic about it.

Actually, it's very erotic. Much sexier to me than explicity pink bits rubbing.

I found this story a great read and very erotic. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

"There's nothing 'Erotica' about this tale. It's all about she and all women have power over his genitals."

Sounds like the very definition of erotica to me. Not to mention only a little different from the real world in terms of women's power over our parts.

... but, in my opinion, most definitely erotic - not to everyone's taste, perhaps, but that goes for almost all the stories here and elsewhere!

I think it has something going for it and I would like to read more. Well done, four stars and don't be upset by negative crits!

I felt his pain...

I love the story! Every aspect of the story is erotic. Women controlling the men, and making them go naked 24/7, as if they were pets. The men are denied any privacy to do with their bodies, and their most private parts put on display for all to see. What more could a man ask for. Give us more, I can't wait.

but when are you going to complete it ? it has been too long ?

come on it has been over a week , please continue this story SOON.......................

What is wrong with you that you have not finished this story? Time to get your crap together and finish or give up now and never write again.

fantastic story

looking forward

A fantastic start. Please keep writing and posting. I'm looking forward to reading more.

If you go too long before you post the next chapter, it takes away from the story. Please post next chapter soon.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Please continue!

please, can we get some more. it is by far the most erotic i've ever read. the way he gets an erection in public, the precum dripping, i just wish i was his girl, or better say, he was my man, please i'm hungry for more

I can see that you have not got an clue has too where this story is headed. You started this story and are not smart enough too continue. If you had a clue you would of posted the next chapter by now. Why do we keep getting these one chapter wonders , that have no clue??????????

Great fantasy. UR here I cum!

when will chapter 2 come, i always imagine maybe a story as a prequal, about how she met tom, how they dated, how the sex was, maybe she saw him the first time playing basketball with a sweat covered shirt, or maybe opening the door shirtless, exposing his trained chest or the enjoyment of a one night stand, couldn't someone else go further with the story, it should be the same or higher level. if he has a 7 inch penis in erection, how great could the sex be, if he has a ring now on his glans, could she suck him, or would that be a discomfort for her, because 3 cm is big to further enjoy his flesh. to explain the tase of his precum, to write about the hair covering his body, in his armpits, around his nipples, a happy trail, the scent of him after a training session, i don't know, but i humble ask for another writer for further enjoyment of our naked and dick-pierced tom.

you do have a lot imagination, last comment. my boyfriend has a 7 inch dick, he is black. the sex is great, i don't think i would enjoy sucking him if he had a ring. but seeing it would definitly turn me on. he did have a nipple piercing, but i asked him to take it out, bacause it did hurt him during our sex

Hugely erotic. Now there's two places I want to go on holiday - Sessia & the UR.

Not sure on the piercings (not my kink) but love the forced nudity and the public erections. :) Also loved how much the woman clearly thought he was gorgeous--none of that useless ugly worm stuff--a hot man naked for her pleasure. Fantastic. Interested to see more stories from the U.R.!

The author is a bitch and she got a dirty mind.

Oh! This is delicious. Okay, kinda daunting concept, 'cause I've got a penis (unpierced). Still, a tantalizing story.

@sub_hubby,

did your wife tell you how to comment?

I expected the piercing to be incredibly painful. I’m aware that some real men have them but that’s the extent of my knowledge. I’m guessing that they don’t damage the urethra?

I think this is great. It's the way every country should be. That is forcing all males to go naked 24/7/365. Of course this would include at work, in the park, at the store, in school, everywhere with no exceptions. Only thing is they should not even get to wear shoes as I see that as clothing. As a strong female I would take my naked male slave outdoors in very cold weather. it would only have on a collar, hands locked behind its back and a ball collar leash. It would give me complete control over it as a female should always have over the lowly male. I of course would be kept warm with nice winter clothing while the male freezes for my delight. My son would have the same way of life as well. Let's start treating males like an object and piece of meat that they are, always naked for our viewing pleasure. ONE STRONG DOMINANT WOMAN

It has been 10 years since.

Nice story. Nice concept.

I thank you, may you rest in peace, i mean it with all my heart

How does he smell...