All Comments on 'Tommy Boy'

GREAT STORY FLOW.

A WELL THOUGHT-OUT STORYLINE.

A VERY GOOD READ.

OH AND VERY EROTIC.

A really good read. Very erotic and also a great storyline. The story was not too long, had lots of sex, but still there, very well constructed. 5/5

Hey like my title say's fucking awsome.

I just read your story, once I started I couldn't stop.

It's fantastic. It's like riding a bike up a hill, alittle

hard to begin with but when you get over the top it's smoth sailing all the way down. Great job. Hopfully you will be

adding more to this story.

there were parts with humor, and definately a story that was believable! no cumbersome dialogue, no eye-rolling descriptions, and definately no extraordinary circumstances!

great job with this story...even though my personal climax came before the end of the story, I certainly "tuned in" long enough to finish the read!

great job and keep them coming!

Good story, well written, but I cannot understand the fixation with blowing your load over a woman's face - surely better in the anus?

It was great very well thought out keep me going the whole time just wish it would have been me when I was a teen growing up.

Learn the difference between lay and lie and laying and lying.

Loved the story. Hope to see more of your writing soon.

Definitely a very erotic story and best of all very plausible.

A very enjoyable read. You even provided reason to not care about the father as he was an inattentive ass. Thanks and keep writing!

Great work,the whole story flows well. Tommy's caring for his mother makes it even better.

This is an excellent story of hot motherfucking by a highly talented writer in his early 20s. There's no doubt that johnnyfever shares his hero's deep interest in a boy shoving his stiff young prick up his own mother's mommy-hole, that wonderful hole between his mother's legs that the boy came into the world from. Plenty of boys love thinking and dreaming of their mother's sweet thrilling coochie, and what they've got jumping around in their pants that'd feel real good stuck up their mommy's hot wet cunt. A mother's cunt is the receptacle nature provides for all the rich warm semen her boy's got sloshing around in his fertile young balls. Tommy and his mom know it, and that's why he keeps shooting great big twatfuls of his creamy sperm up the same cunt he came out of.

Hot fucking story. Mandy now needs to really cuckhold her loser husband repeatedly with her stud son.

great story enjoyed reading it i liked that mom didnt keep fucking the dirt bag neighbor and was horny for sonny hot so far keep on going with this story great so far

Cum dump wimp

I love the idea of him eating her pussy willingly and he did a great job> He deserved to fuck her in both holes. Make me cum and I love that!! Hope when I check you have more of their love!

PLEASE KEEP STORIES LIKE THIS COMMING.

...THANKS...

Great story!! Licking and fucking mom's pussy and ass is the greatest thing and experience.

dude put in a cuck tag or smt fuck.

Well this while yes was incest had other kinks in it as well which you should have said something about and not just thrown into it the readers don't like being caught with surprises like that nor do us with common sense like it when the son takes the lead and in control of it when the mom is the 1 who controls that relationship you royaly screwed up by doing all those things and you didn't have no back drop to it nor the anger that would be there when the son sees what his mom did that bond just wasn't there and that's part of what we wanna read about basically she was just a mother which is just a glorified name for a woman who is just a sperm bank yes there is a difference between a mom and a mother