All Comments on 'Tommy's Neighbourhood Ch. 02'

by TheTitLover

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
first off

First off join the world community and use internationally accepted meanings and spellings for various words. Like:

mum = remain quiet/silent

mummy = dead boady for science study

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Not bad

Story was okay, your main characters seem a little naive to me or maybe a little two dimensional.

as to the previous commentro--get a clue there is no internationally accepted vocabulary for Enblish. Mum is a perfectly normal use name for mothers in both England and Austrailia. JimdinMn

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Well done

Excellent story!

Good writing.

I love the detail

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
first off, Mum hater...

just shut up. You're getting really boring and embarrassing yourself. Attacking Oz stories as well as UK ones now are we? I told you everyone says Mum except you navel-gazing N Americans. Live with it, just like we are expected to believe more people than Superman wear their pants on the outside.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
This rocks!

Mate, pay no attention to the idiot bitching about "mum" or "mom" - this story's great!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

If he gets his mum/mom then this will be true tit heaven.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
excellent series

I love the series so far keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellant

Fantastic series. Keep up the great writing and don't pay attention to those that sniffle about spelling, when there's nothing to whine about. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

great sequel to the first part ; hopefully the will be a new story with Tommy and his mother soon ; make sure that there is lots of titfucking and facials in it ; keep on writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Come on. Don't leave us hanging!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good!

I really liked this story with mature women, big tits and titfucking! THX a lot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Continuation???

Please continue this series! I really enjoy reading your stories and please ignore those 'Mum' haters! Loved your most recent stories too!

TheTitLoverTheTitLoverover 11 years agoAuthor
Ch 03

Is nearly finished. Should be only a few days.

ScottWoodScottWoodover 11 years ago
Good stuff

Really liked all the cum, the first load in her face was my favourite bit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
And it continues

Great second chapter. I like how you main character is progressing as well as the interesting partners. Looking forward to the next installment.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
Dear First Off

I know you will never come back and read the many responses to your comments. I further understand that you posted as the ever popular anonymous so there is no way to contact you directly or ever get your attention as a means of communicating with you.

However, I am compelled to make the futile effort.

Universally accepted version of English? Therefore one, and only one, method of spelling, pronunciation, and usage? Your geocentric egotism is astonishing.

English originated in and is still the language of the land in - wait for it -

England. All subsequent variants that have come into usage are just that variations unique to their own locale. Some of those include, Canada, Australia, New Zealand, South Africa, even India and the United States fall into that category. And, regardless of which version you personally prefer, it must be acknowledged that there are as many differences as there are physically isolated countries.

And may I suggest, when calling someone out for the usage of the "mother tongue" you should first proof read your own posting.

"mummy = dead boady for science study"

Boady? really? are you familiar with a phrase using pot, kettle and black?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good...

But the same sex scene over and over:-(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Superior to the first chapter, this second one continues this is an excellent and engaging drama. It has great characters and the plot is compelling from start to finish. The love scenes are icing on the cake. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Gave it a good shot, but I've got to call it quits.

Should be called "Bimbo's on Parade"

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