All Comments on 'Tongue Lashings'

by abyssalslady

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viking4519viking4519over 17 years ago
Nicely done

Good build up and pacing. I find the thoughts and anticipation of sex to be the most exciting and erotic. You do them well. Only criticism is that the ending was too abrubt. Could have described the texture, temperature, girth of the vibrator and its effect more in contrast to the tongue lashing. Hope to see more from you.

abyssalsladyabyssalsladyalmost 18 years agoAuthor
I'm glad you enjoyed it...Always nice to know

Hope fully everyone shares your comment...:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Oh Yes

Wondeful- as if I was there with you

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