All Comments on 'Too Hot To Handle Ch. 01'

Just out of the Academy and a captain? Methinks not.

A bit mixed up. The various aspects of the events of the story do not flow together very well. At the beginning of the story, as a military veteran, I could easily acquaint the events of the 'sarge' fucking the Captain's wife as this is commonplace amongst certain military scenarios, but then the introduction of the Captain fucking a new mommy with her ample supply of milk got somewhat hard to understand. This story could easily see some good editing if it is continued.

Wow hot hot hot.The hottest story I've ever read in this category.