All Comments on 'Too Hot'

I loved the story line very much. You need to watch your editing of certain words like "public" instead of "pubic". Several others were incorreclty chosen but all in all, its a good story line. Anal in the shower is even hotter than normal for me so it made me tingle as I thought about me being Clair.

Julia

Good story line,but you need a proof reader. A few grammer errors but it was a hot story.

Although there might be some grammatical issues, I was more amused by the earlier comment who's author incorrectly spelled "grammar.'

Enjoyed the story, made me wish for a heat wave!

My only critique would be that plain water is terrible for lubrication for any kind of skin-on-skin penetration. Silicon-based lubes work well in water; very soapy water works very well for lube when shower anal is on the menu.

Otherwise... great story.