by jeninflorida
This was excellent. Don't stop now. Expand this thesis and give us more.
Sman
Any volunteers? Very sexy story - probably every guy's dream!
Jenifer,
I absolutely loved it!! Please don't stop, I'd love to read on.
JD
Jen,
I loved the story. I can hardly wait to read the next installment.
Thanks for sharing.
I thought that your story was very well done.
ned to build more as to the finish you were starting and then it was over can't wait for part two.
hopefully soon
Great story, I know it's alway "hard" to clean everything but as long as all the big items are done thats good!!
Thanks,
hattrick
I think a little more detail would have been nice about him cumming, and what you did afterwards (it kinda "fast forwards). But it was good.
The wife has no feelings for husband she says she feels no guilt after she just cheated on her husband the husband beeter open his eyes and kick her tail out of the house and tell her now she can cheat door to door .
Sad to find that 11 of the 12 readers who left comments thought this story about a brain dead cheating wife was good. Amazing the number of horny teenagers who read literotica.
the Ct. Yankee
However, that was in '03 and it's now '07... we're still waiting for part two.
Best to you Jen, and keep writing.
Now, on to your next story.
Nesher
If they did, surely they'd realize there was no cheating involved, that Thomas and Stephan are the <i>same</i> person?
Please post part two. It's a very arousing story. PS: love your other works as well.
I really liked the story and the surprise at the end was just wonderful. I'm really looking forward to part 2 if you ever get around to writing it.
Nice story! I shall have to hang around until Part 2 comes out. This story is well written and you get a real feel for who Jenifer is. Much fun!
Thanks
Ted
Hi Jenn -- it's been over a month since I found your stories and, like all the others commenting here, I am waiting for part 2. How long will I have to wait <g>. At my age I might not make it.
Barry
great story am certainly looking forward to part 2
there is a problem with scoring the story, it wont register bu I give it a 5
Just another cheating whore story where it's ok to go behind her husbands back. Three yrs married dont give it a fourth unless the hubby is another unending LW chuck
If you write her and tell her you don't like the fact that the wife has no feelings for her husband of three years or that once he finds out he will file divorce. YOU GET BLOCKED. And I am sure she's pulled almost all of the negative comments.