All Comments on 'Topsy Turvy Ch. 02'

I like your writing style very much, because you can picture the characters and the comedic scenes of the story...lol. Loving the characters and the development of the story thus far, even the crazy paranoid ex! So your mojo is still with you, can't wait to the next installment!

loved that ending!!!, Alanna is a chicky one but i love her.

Hahahaha!! Oh that was just tooo good!

a hose or the closet. which one is an actual event that you used for comedic purposes . and i love the story so far. tams needs a arse kick, the other friends need one as well, and simon is going to go atomic, and poor mike not going to know what to do, but he and allana seem like the perfrct mismatch, should be fun to watch it develop

yay you're back!

lol great update.

this is nice. what a turn of events. continue, continue please. :) and do write fast pleaseeeeee....

Glad you're back. More please!

You have great comedic timing. I've been laughing for 30mins. Please update soon. I broke my rule by reading an unfinished story, but I couldn't resist after reading "Chalk and Cheese."

That was hilarious. I am so enjoying this story so far.