All Comments on 'Tori's Gang-Bang'

by tkinsc

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
HOT

Very Nice. a little bit of everything

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nice Job

Great content and it kept my interest and my cunt wet!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Loved it!

Loved the story-wish I was her

Theresa

chell694uchell694uover 18 years ago
Would like to make this one come true for me.

Would love to have 11 hard cocks fucking me and filling me full of cum. Very hot and vivid story. Makes me want to go find a frat house that needs a little sister.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
whew

that was hot. i've had quite a few fraternity guys myself, but never more than 2 at a time.... great to think about though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Hot

It is a tasty fantasy to put oneself in young Tori’s place, and be as desired and taken as she was in this story.

football_studfootball_studabout 16 years ago
WOW!

Wow is really only word that can come to mind at this moment. That story was so hot I just can't believe it. Great idea and great execution. I would love to see a sequel with Tori. Great Job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
fantastic

VERY EROTIC AND HORNY TALE. I READ IT WITH MY BOY FRIEND AND BELIEVE ME , WE COULD NOT STOP EATING , BLOWING OR FUCKING FOR THE WHOLE DAY. WE WILL BE EAGER TO JOIN SUCH A GANG, TORY WAS A LUCKY GAL.KUDOS TO THE AUTHOR

SARAH & ANDREW

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
very well done

i enjoyed the story very much, it was well written, and a good time was had by all. i liked how it ended, thanks and i'll look forward to reading more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The names

Your story came off a little bit like "See Jane suck cock. Jane sucks cock good." You used their names way too much. But, the concept is kinda hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
too much prep

GF at 15 was studying with 5 guys

no booze or drugs

she did

all 5 whole school year every two weeks

showed

me pics during summer

once a ganger always a ganger

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More experimental

Loved your story - Tori is hot and willing. I liked the triple fucking but I think you could have taken it further - with 11 cocks available maybe she could have taken 2 in the cunt while she was ass and face fucked. It's acrobatic sure, but she was baulking at nothing and the guys were hanging about waiting their turn. Maybe she could have taken two in the mouth as well - pounded by the maximum number of cocks she could take at once.

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