All Comments on 'Tormented Ch. 11'

by FallenTreasure

Sort by:

Newest First Oldest First

4 Comments

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

OH MY GOODNESS

WOW! Didn't see that coming. Lily's mom and Abdiel, I'm in shock.Good suspenseful chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how this develops.

Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

Time for Daddy!

It's really time for Lilly's Daddy to show up!! What the hell does he think about his mate being with his daughter's supposed mate Adbiel?!?! It's time he showed up and killed Abdiel and put Tayana in her place. :-)

fuckmeharder69 almost 11 years ago

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! BABY! They're gonna have a baby! Tayana needs to be put in her place but they're gonna have a baby! Literally the cutest thing!

Anonymousover 10 years ago

Next chapter Please!

This just keeps twisting and turning. What's gonna happen next?

Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ

Post as:

Anonymous

FallenTreasure@FallenTreasure

37 Stories

391 Followers

English writer wanting to share her stories with you. For all of those who enjoy my stories and wish to gain access to more in depth plots, a reimagining (and hopefully improved versions) of some of my older works and alternate story lines, then please check out my Patreon. ...

Live Webcams 356 Online!