All Comments on 'Torturous Boots Ch. 02'

by Fetish114

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
Oh dear.....

Funnily I quite like the idea of this story but your use of words and spelling are atrocious.

"Bradley was embarrassed that he had a Bonner but Pete was reassuring," - what is a Bonner? Do you mean boner? Have you never heard of Google to help you with your spelling?

It's not dame it's damn.

Such a shame you're turning the series into a joke.

Fetish114Fetish114over 13 years agoAuthor
PVC Boots!

Pete has a PVC boots which he will use on one of the gang members but you'll have to wait for that chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great

Awesome story man, please go on with writing!

Does pete also have patent boots or a patent gogo style boot for slow torture?

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