All Comments on 'Tough Nuts to Crack'

by azburglar

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BellatrixieBellatrixieabout 11 years ago
Not too bad for a first submission

I love straight guy cock-sucking stories so thank you for posting that!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Awesome story

I am at work where I read this story... and oh my word.. it was so hot! I came in my pants just as Mel did at the bar........ without even touching myself.... sweet orgasm..... thankfully.. no stains...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
come on man...

not even semi-plausible...the dialog and rationale are "overly ridiculous" to imagine this really happening...a good premise for a story...but I lost interest trying to believe any of it as...even as a work of fiction...it's just not convincing...just too inconceivable to take seriously...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fun story

Many guys just need a little encouragement to act on their real desire. many women fantasize about man on man.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good beginning but then you ruined it!

Your story was plausible until you had Dave paint Mel's nails, etc. Haven't you ever watched a woman paint her nails? The way you described the task, it was really impossible. Also, it was unnecessary as the reader could see that Mel was slowly giving in to his subconscious desire to suck Dave's cock. That's how I think you should have finished the story...letting Dave finally convinced Mel to suck.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Thanks

I think it's a really good start, even if a few things are a little far fetched. I would love to see further chapters involving his girlfriend as well and maybe some private cross dressing to go with the makeup.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More cock

Loved your story and really looking forward to Mel crossdressing and becoming a fulltime cumslut

oxfordseaoxfordseaover 10 years ago
Great writing

Hard to read your work and not get hard for more.

oxfordseaoxfordseaover 10 years ago
Cumming Back For More

Reading this again and as hard as the first time. I'm straight as well, but can't deny how hard this story gets me, and how interested I'd be to have that cock on my face and in my mouth. I'd like to see what it is like to suck a cock like that. And yes, I'd be happy to have him cum on my face and swallow. I mean if I''m gon'na suck a guy off, I'm gon'na bitch out for him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Omg

Please write a second story to this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
love it....

everytime.....i blow a load...

midtwnnycmidtwnnycalmost 10 years ago
never get tired of this.....

would love to see an extension to this story...where mel sucks off dave, before dave fucks nicole with big fat slut stick....and mel left stroking and watching

ChronicallyFantasisingChronicallyFantasisingover 9 years ago
just.......so hot

I've memorized this one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
...

And then Mel got his baseball bat and beat Dave so badly that he spent a month in the hospital recovering... and slapped Nicole for being a dumb whore that shows her pictures to men besides her boyfriend.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
THE STORY LINE IS ERITIC, WHO CARES WHETHER IT IS PLAUSIBLE

Dave's a mean mother-fucker determined to get a BJ from Mel.

Mel doesn't deserve a woman like Nicole. She can date me & Mel can go to town on Dave's dick.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Incredible!

Fantastic story. Absolutely one of the best on the site!

aceableaceableabout 5 years ago
Sexy

Super sexy story, i loved being used like that

liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago
Damnation that was hot

I hope this continues

Mamut22Mamut22over 3 years ago
Damnnnn

This story is so hot pls more

VirginioVirginioover 3 years ago
Top Story!

Such a great story. Love it!

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderabout 3 years ago

Love the enthusiasm and exuberance

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Very hot! Sequel or two needed. How does Nicole reqct? Does she like seeing Mel go down on Dave? Is she willing to fuck Dave? Much potential for new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Me and my highschool girlfriend use to organise with a friend of hers to suck he's cock together because I wanted to make her happy and suck he's dick and she loved watching me. This so much refined Ne of those times

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hated this. Dave seems like a prick - he was the one with gay desires, and a manipulative liar on top of it. The story seemed way unrealistic. Especially the part with the nail polish and make-up. Dave was such a highly unlikable character that it tanked this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It’s a really hot story. The manipulation is great and Mel walks perfectly into it…

Things I didn’t like: Nicole share something private like the photo to Dave.

Things I absolutely hate: Dave sissifying Mel. Not only is impossible, but it makes it ridicule

Nicole watching from the door is a nice touch…

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love the big load of cum that Dave showered all over Mel's face. I wonder if Nicole wanted to lick it all off Mel's face and even lick whatever cum was dripping down Dave's thick, hard dick. If I was there, I'd gladly do the cleanup with my eager tongue, swallowing every drop of Dave's delicious jizz! Thanks for a hot, real story. It seemed realistic and makes me wonder if it cums from your experiences.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

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AranelQuinnAranelQuinn12 months ago

Ruined it with the appearance of the girlfriend

HotLipsTHotLipsT9 months ago

It got my dick hard but the girlfriend sitting across from the lying tormentor and the switching between story teller and author was confusing and made me lose interest... I love the concept of Dave being aggressive but the lying was a bit much.

mic1980devmic1980dev6 months ago

one of the best storys ever, and love your language like -champ blowjober - etc, please more, love the tricking pressing sucking cum taste , so fucking hot, please more

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Loved the story.and Dave’s manipulation. But story could have ended in the bar bathroom. Mel could have sucked off Dave’s thick cock then and there. Lots of cum. No need for the girlfriend.

AnonymousAnonymous19 days ago

Can we have a part 2 and 3 to this story?

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