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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Needs Editing and Fucking

Beginning is great

Next part is dull and a turn off

Why not just have him fuck her as soon as she's legal, or when she's a dancer, or when doing the photoshoot? Anything other than when he's in his fifties.

Also, why no actual fuck at the end. Bit of a cop out, that.

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