All Comments on 'Tracey, Slut of a Mother'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Mhmm Right

True story? Right... just like start wars...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Too bad you never got the daughter

You lucky dog!! Any regret at not licking the daughter just a little more?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Crap!

Your stories get worse the more you write, true story my arse, you cannot write to save your life, pls give up now and save us all from your fluent bullshit!

Jennifer CJennifer Cabout 19 years ago
Another great one skip

This one was very daring and erotic I

enjoyed every word! And to anonymous

the only crap on here is your comment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Dialog

Your characters are hard to believe. The dialog isn't realistic. I know you said that the story is true, but I can't imagine anybody actually talking like that. Great idea though, very creative.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Nar

As true as Santa Claus.

Sex descriptions far too brief.

Huge potential, mainly missed, so far.

Lukas

SoftpussSoftpussabout 19 years ago
I must be

Santa Claus, then, because I believe it. To me it rings true, knowing Skip as I do, and I know he would not say a thing is true if it were not. Well done again, Skip. Your life story is certainly unfolding through some of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Of course...

... I don't believe a word of it, but it;s still a great sexy story.

Anonymous
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