by skip.69
You lucky dog!! Any regret at not licking the daughter just a little more?
Your stories get worse the more you write, true story my arse, you cannot write to save your life, pls give up now and save us all from your fluent bullshit!
This one was very daring and erotic I
enjoyed every word! And to anonymous
the only crap on here is your comment!
Your characters are hard to believe. The dialog isn't realistic. I know you said that the story is true, but I can't imagine anybody actually talking like that. Great idea though, very creative.
As true as Santa Claus.
Sex descriptions far too brief.
Huge potential, mainly missed, so far.
Lukas
Santa Claus, then, because I believe it. To me it rings true, knowing Skip as I do, and I know he would not say a thing is true if it were not. Well done again, Skip. Your life story is certainly unfolding through some of your stories.
... I don't believe a word of it, but it;s still a great sexy story.