All Comments on 'Tradition and Triumph'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

His relentless manipulative, affection-free mindset is profoundly distasteful. There's no solitary mention of any nonphysical attribute of his prey. Each story element concerns seduction tactics, never a mention of hoped-for human connection, much less love. Of course the protagonist is an invented fictional construct. Unless he's meant as a cautionary object lesson in male triumphalist belt-notching, the author's inadvertently outing himself as souless creepazoid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WHAT IS THE REASON?

"Now she was single and I somehow gained access to her inner circle of friends."

was chuck the reason she was single,or did her husband die ? my guest it is just a story and his fantasy , as INDIANS do hold through in bad times in marriage's.More so where they are far away from family.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Beautiful narration, real and good description

I liked the way he took baby steps... the way he describes her body and her urges... very good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great

Very well written indeed, and very credibly too. Thanks to the author.

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