All Comments on 'Trained By Dad Ch. 01'

Loved the intro!

Your intro should have been longer, too include how her father became involved. I don't even know what the girl's name is.

love this your first story trained by dad,

i always like to read first stories as i can then see if it going to be, well worth the read more often or not it is as is yours. so i now want to read more parts of this some want very erotic story, im sure it going to become. so young lady let go, more please more.

I am older.......love petite.......love your candid approach....but am not from the uk.......to bad

i will wait for your next instalment

WTF!! Where is the story. This may be a good start but it was a crappy way to end it! SERIOUSLY!!!!!!

Is this your idea of a teaser?

Make sure you get on the bus with her ~ and stay away from your computer!

I liked how it started, and I can't wait for you to continue on. I think it'll be something of interest to see how your writing grows since this is your first. Thank you for taking a step and giving it a try. Keep trying! :D

Is that it??

At least for this chapter.

Keep writing, I enjoyed it.

Besides the "taboo" thing about anal, there is the issue of boundaries (not in the healthy sense but in the limitations, familiarity, expectations). The desire for anal can be of less perverse motivation and one of desiring full intimacy without reservations; basically "letting yourself go". His "agenda" he's (possibly, hopefully) is that level of intimacy with no holds (or holes) barred. That is often more daunting to a young person than any physical act.

Probably best that Tiiy decided to discontinue her writing and concentrate on her lifelong journey as a school bus driver.