All Comments on 'Training Ch. 25'

As usual B.T. another good chapter involving the beautiful Dhea. This Doctor Paul seems like he really needs his ass kicked and I hope the kid doesn't get burned in the long run(Bobby) ciao.

You should of ended this story about 15 chapters ago.It started off pretty erotic, but now it's going downhill because you're stretching the storyline too far.Would of been better off splitting it up into several differant stories instead of trying to weave them all together. I've been faithfully reading it from the start and will keep reading it til the end just to see how you wrap it up. All things aside,keep writing. You're a very good writer!

This has to be the worst story ever posted on Lit. And it went on and on and on and on and on. You deserve an award for being the longest bore in history. God awful garbage, bar none. Happily you don't post anymore. Thank god for that!

insane raving from a old ugly fag! The asshole of LIT!! yep, that's a great name for your sorry ass!!