All Comments on 'Transcontinental Swap Ch. 05'

OK, YOU LOST ME! YOU JUST HAD TO DO IT! COULDN'T LEAVE WELL ENOUGH ALONE, COULD YOU. YOU BROUGHT SO MANY PEOPLE INTO IT, ONE NEEDS A SCORECARD! PLUS...PLUS YOU SORT OF IGNORED THE WEST COAST SPOUSES. WELL, YOU LOST TWO STARS FOR THAT ASSHOLE.

This is just AMAZING ! 1) For having thought it up 2) For being talented enough to write it in an interesting way that kept me reading it straight through all the chapters .

As to the other comments of lost characters , bullfeathers its an ongoing story and I am hooked on it as I am on the Morrisons .

Although it is a different kind of interest .

Thanks

TX CRACKER

Got too off the deepend and crossed lines into the weird/unlikely.

Wow, I love the way the story has developed, it made me laugh in a few places, and enjoyed some unexpected twists, in all a well crafted story, I do enjoy the poly ones most.