All Comments on 'Transforming Genevieve Ch. 02'

my wife would undergo such a transformation!

all but a prostitute - except she doesn't get paid for it - like they say marriage is only legalised prostitution. cheaper to stay single and pay a whore when you want a fuck.

like the story so far... but i think the end of this chapter would have been great if he left a couple of hundred for his whore...

This chapter continues the character development that the reader is introduced to in the first chapter. As in that one, the pacing of this chapter is careful and never rushed. There is plenty of plot, and the love scene, if somewhat brief, balances off the plot quite well in this chapter. The ending to this chapter subtly reveals that this story is going to be much more of a Romance than anything else. The writing is outstanding, and developing story deepens, which, of course, only creates greater interest in the reader. Finally, the story is well-written, and its use of the first person is well done.

i read all parts of this in one go. please please continue the story and have them meet up for passionate weekends.

Wow!

Excellent awakening for Miss Genevieve Walker. What comes next??