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Dear Literotica Reader,

Thanks for taking the time to read this submission. The "Trantor" series is another set of stories I wrote during the 1980's (in a somewhat different form) and had published in a "gentlemans magazine" that is no longer in print.

I typed it out on an old Remington typewriter and onto a continuous sheet of teletype paper for the first draft. I then retyped and edited it for submission back then.

Since that period, I've moved about a dozen times and I lost several of the final draft pages and the teletype paper is slowly disintegrating. I've been attempting to recapture and improve on what I wrote back then, but there are two chapters missing that I haven't been able to rewrite in the same manner. I will keep trying, though!

You might find it amusing that, at the time I'd written this story, I'd never been inside a BDSM club and had (unsuccessfully) tied up a woman only once. I've since discoverd a bit more about my Dom side and have frequented a few dungeons since then - but only as an observer.

Passion is a strange thing. It can make people rise to new heights of sexuality and it can frighten some with it's intensity. I did that with one woman that I thought to be my soul-mate and I lost her to another. But I've moved on and grown stronger for that.

Please leave your comments and let me know how you liked my story! A writer improves with practice and feedback, so your thoughts are very much invited.

Pyro

Just read your Trantor stories and loved them both! Well written and very arousing! Hope you can find some more!Thank you!

Where's the rest of it?

Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!