by Salvor-Hardon
very fun read...so if I admit I'm naughty do I get more from Travieso my list is sooooo long...good job!!
I like stories that put a smile on my face and keep it there through the end. I love it, so much fun to read.
Highly amusing, Sir Thumb. Wish I could meet Travieso. Good opening too. It really caught my attention, cuz I 'member seeing those glass dildos on an episode of Real Sex.
with a clever twist. No reason why the boys and girls who are considered to be bad whould be left out. I believe, by the way, the original "Santa Baby" was sung by Eartha Kitt. I think it was in 1953 and she recorded another version of it the following Christmas.
Hurry down my chimney tonight....*brilliant smile*
One of the better stories I have read on here, darlin.
Or should that be...Master....*purrrrrrrr*
I think I'll address my Christmas list to Anti-Claus this year!
I sure hope I made his list this year...I've been wanting a red acrylic toy too. *swoon*
Great story. I like your take, very much.
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por favor, escribe mas historias asi :) Well-written, fun, and damn do I need un hombre travieso in my life :)
Happy holiday and good luck in the contest.
Ali
Great tack to take diverging from the norm. A well done and flowing tale nicely told. Very fun read. Thanks Sal
Everybody wants a visit from Travieso! Very well done!
What language is that, by the way? Sounds Italian.
Very good job on setting and a clever twist to the usual Christmas story. Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
I've been naughty this year- do you think he'll bring me what I want???
or roses for that matter. I now know what every good girl wants.
Ahhhh, Sal, you always have the best toys--i knew i wanted to play at your house. Well written, naughty idea--loved it. I'm sure Santa is smiling right now.
For naughty's sake? Fantastic premise! I really enjoyed your characterization, and I chuckled at the palm pilot and "dork" comment. Definitely wouldn't mind a visit from this guy... oooo what am I admitting to? <grin> Good luck in the contest!
Loved this story, Sal...Tara's my kinda gal..and Travieso...ohhhhh, just yummy..
~Honey
...for the second big smile you put
on my face this morning ; ) Thanks for sharing this
& very best of luck to you in your first contest!
... I guess I know who is delivering at my house this year. *smiles* Nice job Sal had me grinning. Good luck in the contest.
Always, Lizzy
Great job.. had me hooked from the start! But alas.. I don't want a red dildoe... unless it comes with a girl!
I love the idea!! I'm seeing a sequel here, run with it baby!!! This was fun.
Abs.
Interesting idea but why humor? It just seems an odd choice. Good luck!
Cookie :)
is in the humor satire category, it wasn't funny but was well written and enjoyable. Good luck in the contest.
A nice twist on the St. Nick stories with the Yin/Yang factor. Good luck