All Comments on 'Tre Lloyd Adventures Ch. 13'

Hope to see more updates and more often. Great story

Like your story. Are you ever going to write a sequel to "The Twins' Girlfriend"? Ayaria could use another couple of boyfriends on top of being with Jon and Mykael. Just a suggestion.

Dude, that was a kind of story you get hooked on to and can't let go...nice character building, great visualisation and superb imagination. when are the later chapters coming in? i'm desperate to know what happens next...

The kind of story in which one gets hooked on to & simply can't let it go..awesome imagination, gr8 visualisation & nice character building.

When are the latest chapters coming in? Desperate to know...

The story hasn't ended rite ???? Hey i keep getting withdrawals...a hell lot of time has passed....eagerly waiting !!!!

Love this chapter.

Where did you go? Just when the story becomes so interesting, you stopped. If you didn't know before how good we think it is, I'm telling you now. Please write more!

The story was great, but I would like to read more please.

Regards

Chris

Very good story why didn't you finish it????????

Another unfinished story. Was getting good to

Great story. I should have checked that it had an ending first. Will any of you clever authors be willing to continue and finish this?.