All Comments on 'Trip to England Ch. 01'

what is hate? Sorry not believable.

This is a good start on what could be a good d/s story. The writting is pretty good and the sex scenes are pretty hot. Don't let negative comments about the plot get to you. Some people can't seem to remember that this is fiction and fantasy. They want to attack a work based on its plot, not about its believabillity but about its content or implications. If they don't like d/s they shouldn't read that type of story. If your plot doesn't devolve into another wimp hubby story it should be enjoyable to anyone interested in power transfere or d/s and hot wives/voyer hubbys. Look forward to reading more.

I'll skip the rest.

i like these types of story. it is well written & well constructed so far. give me more please!

Good start and a real way to start into the scene not turning your wife over to a total stranger. A good domme would start in just this manner - building trust.

Forget the negative comments, many of us enjoy this type of plot. I look forward to the wife's re-emergence as a sexy woman ready to please with her favours.

If only I had know that a believable plot wasn't essential in fiction I never would have wasted all that time reading. Thank you to those posters who have corrected my errors.

BTW, that's sarcasm. Normally I wouldn't point it out, but given the moronic comments I've read, it seems necessary.

Read all 6 chapters (on another site) and all I will say is that everyone here is in for a big treat!!!

loves the story, more please ....

dominate - verb

dominant - adjective

I need this guy, I can't even get my old hound to obey me.

More English garbage, almost as sick as the cuck stories.