All Comments on 'Trip to the Movies Ch. 02'

Shit this was soo hot, f'n creamed my pants.

Damned good.... The story line is excellent, don't stop the story, see how long you can keep this story line flowing. Don't do what MOST authors do let them screw a few times then just end the story, give us the rest of the story too. Great job !!!!!!

I Agree keep story coming thank,

Damn that was soooo damnnnnnn Hoooooot!!! Brother sister sex is the hottest thing around. Just keep it comming Master Vassago

I really liked this story. It had me bustin my nut in no time. The only thing I didnt like was how the story seemed a bit rushed.

i really wish you had used a good editor before posting several STUPID errors that pull the readers out of the story trying to figure out what you mean. wait instead of weight is just one do us all a favor and delete and rewrite the series using a good editor to help fix the STUPID errors.

Revelation about what? What does that mean? Did you mean 'revulsion'? Because they're not the same thing...And just where did you learn to write such cheesy dialog? Oy vay! So many idiotic errors, please get an editor (a grown-up one) and come back and write about sex when you get past puberty and actually get some, until then, please, just stop...