All Comments on 'Trish's Place... Ch. 11'

Thank you! You're both right with your constructive criticisms and I'm glad you pointed me in the right direction.

Anon 1-Hopefully, in subsequent chapters and parts of the current chapter 11, I will satisfy the 'mechanics of threesomes' appropriately.

Anon 2-Again, you're right...I didn't realize how much I've overused the 'device' of weed in the story. While weed is a useful tool, I have overused it to excess. Thank you for pointing this out to me....

Enjoy,

JS

Good for Lori who didn't have to go home alone after all.