All Comments on 'Trophy Wife's Trophy'

I'd like to see where the story leads.

continue.

yes, let's continue this...not sure the cumming all over her face fit this character, but I get the depravity angle. I loved the way you built the story and kept the action moving and exciting. You made some tense and grammarical errors that may have been caught if edited better, but that is a very small complaint. it was better writing than anything I've ever seen in this category and appealed to both men and women I think. I'd love to see a softer side of her in the next chapter, maybe up the reluctance quotient on her part...she may be rethinking things with him as she wonders if she likes this 'toy' too much...maybe he teases her, spanks her...I could see this going into a nonconsent version where the sex becomes more dangerous...another dinner party, he screws her doggie style near where the party is happening...I think these characters have a great potential to continue to excite readers.

A very enticing build up in which one can form a picture of both characters and the setting. The lust which follows is animal, graphic and sheer, yet described in exquiste tones which transports the reader there in articulate and vividly imaginative ways with much attention to detail. Excellently written. Well done.

I agree with Quil... from UK. Forget the whining and long drawn out commentary from the other reader.

Please, please get this exquisite lady buggered by her boy toy next. The stable is an ideal location but maybe you could move the action to another place?

Extremely hot story! You must continue the adventures of "Our Man Dan" and the beautiful Mrs Harrington! Another romp in the stables with Dan sliding his cock into her ass would be lovely indeed!

i think you did a very good job in describing every thing. please do continue. although i am going to have to go opposite from the other person that wrote a comment and say i would like to see her get more depraved. awesome job

Please continue would love to know more about Mrs Harrington and her "boytoy"

North Shore was ok, this is better. Keep up the good work.

Love the way you explore and detail your fantasy of married women who love to stray and flaunt it. Bravo

what the hell are you waiting. bring in new chapters. this was fucking wonderful man, continue.!!!!!! PLeassssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee

Story is satisfactory.

Let's have more of the boy-toy/depraved, but classy lady adventures.They definitely have to have an anal adventure, she needs his cock in her ass.

Great :)

Great style!

....Watching her long manicured fingers, adorned with the huge diamond, shucking up and down his cock, his ears assaulted by her filthy mouth, Dan could take no more. ...

and how she treats his nipples with those long nails..!

Just a dream!

More, more, more....!!!

Run with this, or run with North Shore Whore, but run with one of them. I grew up in what the Barrington locals call "horse country." The phrase was usually uttered by hot trophy wives like this one, climbing out of their Range Rovers and Suburbans at the local Starbucks, dressed to the nines for a mid-morning coffee break. Good to see (or at least fantasize) that some of those trophy wives can get dirty.

Is she going buy him a ticket to visit her for a week in Florida to party with her and other trophy wives?

Outstanding effort. This story was terrific---excellently written, sharp in the dialogue department, very hot. It was so far above a lot of the cookie-cutter drivel you come across so often on this site. Please keep it up. I just read your newest posting, and went back to see your past work. I'll every one if they're even half as good as this.

I agree with your other commentators. This story was well written. Very sexy.

Thanks.

Not bad at all, deserving of follow up of one more tryst at least.

Love your stories, and style. Also, very well-written. Keep it up!

A very well done story with lots of room for future trysts. I would like to see how this could grow in various directions such as fetish (anal) or perhaps Mrs. Harrington forced into a non-consentual situation.

That was one of the best i have read on this site.

If there is any adult entertainment directors reading this here is a story that could be a good film.

Keep up the good work.

More of This, lots more...

Loved your writing about Our Man Dan and the North Shore sluts! I know a little bit about the type, my wife having been a Northwestern sorority girl, and I also enjoyed the USC typing of some of the men--also right on. There is something highly erotic about the high heat of the well-groomed, moneyed, arrogant, and angry female, and Our Man Dan knows when to pick up their gloves. I enjoy the sightings at the Chicago, Near North, and North Shore landmarks and watering holes as well--color is accurate and good. Altogether I find your stories at a level of pandsal who writes in the English idiom of the high-placed but sexually aggressive. Terrific stuff, and keep it up! Dan's my guy!

Has Dan still got her phone number? And can I have it? LOL This was a well written account and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Mebbe Dan could ring her and arrange a sequel? I would if I was Dan <cough> - Well done ISaw!!

awsome

Write part 2 ASAP !

When is Dan gonna get off his ass and ring this H O T MILF.

Fantastic story.

I loved the use of the "old man Dan" title, which successfully conveyed a flirtatious and playful tone with each use, obviating the need to explicitly describe it. It also managed to suggest a power differential between the two, at least in my mind, placing her firmly out of his reach, unless she chose to place herself in it. The use of Mrs. Harrington, as Dan's preference when referring to her, supported that nicely, while also reinforcing the maturity of the character, and invoking the spectre of a Mr. Harrington.

Each of those points would be true on their own, but it was the way they all worked together to strengthen and emphasize each, that I was really impressed by. Very nice.

Also, I very much appreciated your use of "crinkled anus" to clearly, and evocatively, describe something that too often ends up cartoonishly dirty, or off-putting.

Finally, the use of the saddle horn was inspired, and it's natural fit into the environment strengthened the credibility of the setting, and provided an excellent vector for a fetishistic act that might have otherwise seemed out of character for Mrs. Harrington.

Yeah, I loved it. Hope to read more.

please rite a sequel....

Needs a sequel

This story needs a sequel.

Very original sex and setting; good job.

Please, please, please CONTINUE THIS THREAD....loved it!!!!

Loved Mrs. Harrington also. Thanks.

tom anon

I look forward to more of Mrs Harrington's adventures! She's a naughty, naughty woman! Well done story.

Excellent story.

More, give us more, please.

Must have a follow up, thank you.

And the absurdity of the situation. That was fucking HOT!

want to hear more episodes of his big cock spreading her pussy and fucking her. hubby may well be in on the scheme, as he may be eating her out after Dan nuts her.

is there going to be a sequel?

very nicely written

hot, very hot, more please

Loved it ! best ever of all of yours. (very good too though)

Where's CH 2 ? PLEASE !!! I picture Dan being rough with Mrs. Harrington, with lots of spanking, and ass to mouth ? maybe in Aspen ?