All Comments on 'Tropical Adventure'

great story and well written, wish there had been more,

It was a good story however it was a little long for the short sex scene and you mixed up the females names and actions a couple of times

written carefully, calculated to give rise to an erection. excited me to ejaculation.

could have been a full on but was confused by the problem of not getting the names right at certain times of the stories. made it confusing. also your names are the same as previous individuals in your stories but you don't mention others and there can be no time line because of that.

Pretty good story, though not much sex. A MAJOR problem was the confusion of which woman you were talking about, which sometimes led to serious confusion--it interfered with the story. When we couldn't tell which sister was doing what it led to confusion.

And it shows; immature, rushed, poorly developed and poorly written. No stars, go and have some sex before you have the temerity to write about it, this was written the way a virgin talks about sex; with enthusiasm and ignorance.

needs more dialog

Loved the story. Good build up and nice finish. Gave me a solid hard on. Couldn't come since I was not in a private space. Thank you for a wonderful story. Keep writing.