All Comments on 'Trouble with Orcs'

has been mentioned in the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout which can be found in the bulletin boards

The storyline is very similar to those other orc stories found here. Orcs found fae maidens, elf girls or humans and orcs ravish them.

I'm not sure how good yours would turn out to be but there are some spelling mistakes here and there and you might want to be more careful in your next chapter.

Loved the story! Dying to read the rest of it, I hope you don't make us wait to long!!!!

write more, it was good

After surviving a battle she is taken prisoner by an Orc, carried to a cave and tied up. When she discovers why she was allowed to survive she terrified. Fast moving story!

Finish the story, finish the story, finish the ding-dong story. Oh yeah one more thing, FINISH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please finish the story soon!

great piece of work!

I loved the story so far, very hot. Please, I'd love to see the next chapter!

Mistress Darkness

This was a great start, continue writing!

I like how the two characters take in their fill of one another - the girl seeing Malruk as anything but a monster, and her captor seeing her (for the first time, but still playing it tough) as anything but an object, especially how Malruk, instead of raping her, is surprised, much against his own nature, that he wants her to share mutual pleasure with him, rather than take it by force. Could this be the beginnings of a romance between an unlikely pair? Please update soon.

this is very nice reading. please, please, please finish this story. it's too good to just not come back to it.

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter! Great read :) Awesome story~

Where is the waited next chapter? I'm dying out here. This waiting is killing me. I have to read what Marluk will do to the girl.

I'm curious how it goes with the two.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep it up!

I love orc stories. Interested to see if a romance buds between these two. :)

AMAZING SOOOOO GOOOOD PLZ WRITE MOAR SOOOO HAWT AAAHHHH!!!!!!