by doublechoc
Nice intro to ... what? I could feel the emotions and passion, but this was only a tease. Keep it up though, at least it was coherent. Thanks for your effort. Tail End Pete
Incredibly descriptive, erotic ... definitely leaves me wanting more (like the woman)
that chapter was ridiculously short. i hope you submit more chapters soon. i like your writing but lets face it no one wants to get hooked on too short chapters, of a potentially good story, that are few and far between, so please don't leave me hanging.
seriously, it's the first story she post here! Be kind!
I really liked it a lot. The way you describe how she feels so detailed... I loved it!
I really hope there will be another chapter to it!
That was an amazing start. You have the beginning of a great story. I can't wait to read more.
It really is. Can't wait to see more. Ignore people who demand more and faster; write when you can, as you can.
maybe make the next a little longer?but otherwise i lik=ve the story.
Please continue. I would like to know what happens. Great story.
Hey, just wanted to let you know that we'd still be thrilled to hear more on this...very well-written! Please continue when you get a chance if at all possible!!! =)
This is a great story and could be one of the bests if finished.
I really hope you finish it. It is far too rare with female werewolves, especially ones mating with humans. Also I really like how her mating insticnts are defined. It may seem exaggerated to most people, but I think it sounds very animalistic and werewolves are after all alot less confined than us. The only thing I don't like is that she sees her wolf as a different personality inside her, but that's so common that I've gotten used to it.