All Comments on 'True Love Between The Races'

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APAPover 19 years ago
There really should be a sequal to this.

You should focus on what happens afterward. Is she on the pill? Has she gotten pregnant with his kid? Does she WANT to be pregnant with his kid? If she isn't pregnant, will she want repeats until she is? Will she want repeats up to and after a legal and religious declaration of their bonding?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Top ratings for this one!

With a few more chapters this could rival "Colorblind" as a top quality interacial romance!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
i second that

there really should be a sequal...if felt unfinished somehow. pls keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good... BUT

get a proof-reader. a lot of typos and mispelling. i would have given a 100, but with all the spelling, it was distracting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
IR

Very nice IR story..first time I've read one with the WM/BF senerio...me like! Will there be more?! Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Unbelievably erotic

I was so wet reading this story I almost raped my husband. Great sexual discriptions Good job Needyou!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
awesome

oh i loved ur story. keep up the good work.

GoddivaGoddivaover 16 years ago
true love between the races

This story is so sensual and sexy. I want a John of my own!

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