by NeedYou
You should focus on what happens afterward. Is she on the pill? Has she gotten pregnant with his kid? Does she WANT to be pregnant with his kid? If she isn't pregnant, will she want repeats until she is? Will she want repeats up to and after a legal and religious declaration of their bonding?
With a few more chapters this could rival "Colorblind" as a top quality interacial romance!
there really should be a sequal...if felt unfinished somehow. pls keep up the good work
get a proof-reader. a lot of typos and mispelling. i would have given a 100, but with all the spelling, it was distracting.
Very nice IR story..first time I've read one with the WM/BF senerio...me like! Will there be more?! Cheers!
I was so wet reading this story I almost raped my husband. Great sexual discriptions Good job Needyou!
This story is so sensual and sexy. I want a John of my own!