All Comments on 'Truly Unreal'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story

Good story . Pt 2 please

sblazer227sblazer227over 9 years ago
Good start

This is a really good start, i hope there is a part 2. I wanna know more about this Cale, not sure im on his side yet. Navi sounds like a go getter, i can only imagine being a musicians' sidepiece isnt going to go over well with her.

ncpecanpiencpecanpieover 9 years ago
Good Intro

Yes she is to smart to be a side piece. Like when a girl gets under a "jerks" skin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love

I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome so far

This could be an incredible book, but if you don't expand it into a novel please at least make a part 2. I need to know if Navi shows up and if anything beyond one night of passion happens between them.

bluesladybluesladyabout 9 years ago
When

Are you planning to continue?

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