All Comments on 'Trustworthy People Ch. 01'

Nothing new here the wife to be cuckolds the husband to be, Wow that's a new concept.

Very very good start Kyle_Stephens. I love this genre of beautiful women being selfishly used in nc/reluctant scenarios. I can only hope that Luke is the first "trustworthy" person to take this beauty as his. I also hope that a veritable mob of other horny males (one at a time please) sexually exploit her before and after her marriage. Claire will plead and protest as male friends, associates and even future relatives enjoy her but she always enjoys it in the end (sorry for pun). All is safe and fun in Literotica fantasy land and thanks for the story.

It is not clever to write very, very, very short chapters. Worse to barely develop the plot or the characters. Oh, my suspense at the end! So what, not clever! Just irritatingly amateurish. LONGGGGGGGG chapters better to let the reader get into the story. At the moment you have not really created much of a reason to read this IF you continue.

The squib, way too short to call it a story, was not bad and if there is a sequel I will likely read that as it could develop into something.

But squibs like this offend the readers and do you no favor on ratings.

Way to short. Present your story and dont play games.

Way too short, unless the whole story is only 2 pages.

....some place new. Wasn't Trent at the bachelor party?

Stupid to end a story as abrupt as this one. No one wants to read half a story...

end the story

...too damn stupid to write a story and finish it.

Where's the rest

Hope it's bad news for the nasty cheating whore. Cuck her.

There are to many half finished story's out there and it's so frustrating when it ends on a cliffhanger and no final chapter . Nil points