by elbiscayne
It had everything, love, lust, a huge array of "tools", and a large amount of tongue-in-cheek humor.
Welcome to the appreciation you deserve.
Read both your efforts - nice touch - nice delivery - very human dialog and thoughts.
More Please - Thanks and Regards
A rarity from me, audible laughter. And I happened to be reading this at work. Good thing the guests weren't up yet!
It's readable, it's believable, and I have put you in my personal favorites.
2 Stars, and lucky to get that...
It had the makings of a good story, right until you blew it with the last paragraph.
Waste of a decent storyline, and a waste of time reading it,,