by blaster666
YES YES YES!!!! GREAT STORY!!!! keep it going, maybe mom and Julie!!!!!
Funny part is I don't think you was really planning to make this a long term project but you writing style is so good you can't help it. I love when a mother and son make love and in this story I feel tucker and his mom have more of a romance between them then Julie. Getting mom pregnant may be something you may wanna look into seeing that you never addressed if she had any sort of protection against getting pregnant. It definitely something I be interested in seeing how tucker and mom handle that situation. With the rest of the week ahead of them I don't see how she wouldn't be pregnant lol. BG
Have enjoyed your story thanks yeah go ahead and jock up mom and sis.
Don't let others influence your writing. This was great the way it was and sure didn't need anything else thrown into the mix. Write your own stories and keep on trucking.
The old fart
Finally some emotional chemistry, sensitivity, and passion between characters. Even some adoration and respect as well as self-awareness. This is the only chapter that I have rated 5 stars.