by Perky_Goth_Chick
Oh, hell. Super story period. I think this story will make many want to have a birthday gift like this. Very well written - the introduction, the seduction, the foreplay and the sex all have a delightful quality to them. I am fascinated and enchanted. This from someone who seldom reads in the non-human genre.
Please don't forget to write the Christmas story in this line. Maybe another story explaining the female hobgoblin. =)
You need to write a sequel to this please! You're such an awesome writer! I've read this story twice already! :D
Excellent stories, most writers have one or two stories with your quality.
I loved all of your stories.
Excellent plot, characters, delivery.
Tasty erotic play.
Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more.
Classic lines, excellent writing, humour and sexxx- you've got it all! Well done and please please please write more soon!
wow. you should definetly right more stories. maybe even a sequel to this. i absolutely loved it. its a shame the rating scale doesn't go higher though.
I Can Honestly Say That You Are Now My Favorite Writer On This Site. And Thats Really Saying Something Isnt It? Masterfully Written. You MUST Write More Stories Like This. Ive Read All Your Storys And Love Them All. If You Wrote A Bunch Of These It Would Make A Wonderful Book Of Short Stories. Id Buy It. Affectionatly, Lovelyevenindeath
Such an erotic story I began at times to forget we were in the realms of the faerie and more in the world of the firey. Well written, with the right pace, right level of detail and the capacity to produce in me a right hard-on and for my partner Noah's flood. So when is the Christmas story out?! Definitely a seven out of 5 :)
holy cow that was great... you need to write a book filled with stories like that lol... it makes me want to light a smoke :)
creampuffsucubus on literotica
trippychick everwhere else lol:)
This story brought back some rather plesant memories of my loves deflowerment. I sent her a link, I am impressed by your imagery and fluid use of character, dialogue and action. Graphic enough for extreme enjoyment, Tantalizing at the same time. Quite impressive.
-Treefrog